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Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 13th, '09, 13:11

yo i kill whores faster than you can skill words
beating up turds lke you while i video tape "watch in hq"
yo bitches can't tell me shit cause when they do i flip
and let it rip, rip them apart and that's just the start
yo, you assholes don't know whhat i'm running in these flows
better take your notes now cause after i spit your brain explodes
got the world in my hand and trew it in a garbage sac
while i'm chillin, smokin crack, with my boyz sippin on yack
bitch you can't respond, cause when i bomb
you put your head in the sand and wave a white flag in your hand
slut, better run cause i'm runnin for ya
take youre fucking clothes of ya, beat you to death and then fuck ya
sick in the head , mentally deranged
spraying my rage all over this fucking page
bitch, you aint talking to a stranger, call me the major, have you endangered
but don't make me hate ya cause if so you'll be sleepin tonight in the graveyard
modern day mozart, give me that visa card or i'ma kill you and your bitch-ass bodyguard
yo yo, i'm killin it, drillin shit out of my head with intelligence
you be vigilent cause when i stab you in youre face you'll think i did it in your back
and you get youre head traped in the car that you just jacked
get your bones cracked, while i get hand claps,
these people don't even know youre here, youre invisible my dear
so go home, and watch some gay porn you little homo.
haha, laugh in youre face, i'm in outter space
doing so much drugs my brain got missplaced
winning the race, you loosing my trace
weapon of mass destruction, you got lost from the introduction
leave you in fractures or should i say raptures
get your ass cured, with this vaccin of words, nerd.
Last edited by emzee-frenzy on Aug 13th, '09, 14:46, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby BILI » Aug 13th, '09, 14:21

not bad at all :y:
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby gutawafang » Aug 13th, '09, 14:25

For a freestyle, I get it that some lines don't make sense. But your skills are pretty good man. Flow's okay.

The title kinda made me smile a little cuz it reminds me of KFC. Lmao! Like, "crispy" or "original"? The customer answers... "100% original!" :D
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 13th, '09, 14:39

gutawafang wrote:For a freestyle, I get it that some lines don't make sense. But your skills are pretty good man. Flow's okay.

The title kinda made me smile a little cuz it reminds me of KFC. Lmao! Like, "crispy" or "original"? The customer answers... "100% original!" :D


yeah , i was browsing youtube and found an insane beat, and i just opened a notepad and started writing, i didn't even care what i was saying, it was like hypnosis , and i didn't adjusted it afterwards, that's why i say it's 100% original :sweating: , thx guta :y: :happy:
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby gutawafang » Aug 13th, '09, 14:45

no problem. :flower:

Keep dropping bro. I'll feed as much a man. :y:
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 13th, '09, 21:33

yeah by the way i found you on twitter ;)
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby gutawafang » Aug 14th, '09, 14:15

emzee-frenzy wrote:yeah by the way i found you on twitter ;)

great. :y: let's freestyle there. HAHAHAHAHAHAH!
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 14th, '09, 14:28

yeaaah :smoking: goes a little something like " i'm so bitter when i'm not on twiiter, gotta let people know i'm still alive cause if i don't theyre all gonna think i died" , that's whack as fuck but it's supposed to sound corny
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 14th, '09, 14:33

keep sharpening those skills of yours, or else you'll get dull and lose all control, haha!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 14th, '09, 14:44

and i loose control, then the lyrics police patrole, pullin me over for sure, aint got no licence or registration, well that's it take a vacation and get a new vocation... ahaha :beerchug:
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Re: quick freestyle 100% original

Postby gutawafang » Aug 14th, '09, 14:45

emzee-frenzy wrote:and i loose control, then the lyrics police patrole, pullin me over for sure, aint got no licence or registration, well that's it take a vacation and get a new vocation... ahaha :beerchug:

Aweomsness! :worship:
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