Diabolic

[BILI]

I know you want to fuck wit me lady,but dont cuz I`m crazy,baby
I`m diabolic,and evil is what made me,I`m as crazy as Slim Shady
So stop acting tough you lazy shit,or I`ll rape your mom,that sexy bitch
Tie`er up to a chair,put out my dick,and put it inside`er you fuckin prick
Trust me it won`t be quick,Ima go slowly with that fuckin chick
Raping is in my blood,so when I cum its like a fuckin flood
I`m like a horny stud,pimpin,actin like a tough fuckin thug
Bitch starts to scream,shes hoping its just a dream,while I put cream
On her vagina,I never asked he for I name,but she screamed Carolina
And then the horror begin just like in China,when I nail her wit machete

[Spyder]

well........ that was weird lol
not bad as far as lyrical some pretty basic rhymes
and i didnt really like when u got into the cities thing, but not bad man keep rappin

[BILI]

thx
Lol yeah I know it was weird,when I read it I was like wtf,first I didnt even wanted to post it but then I was like what a hell...I usually dont write this kinda stuff....I like emotional and personal stuff much more

[emzee-frenzy]

i ike it, but i don't know, it's strange ), not in it's content, but in the rhymes..i don't know, keep droppin

[gutawafang]

I don't like the slim shady and eminem references, like TOTALLY. So cut on them man. In fact, remove them totally. Haha. But I see you been practicing hard man. Props for that. The starting line was so fucking lousy, turned me off totally cuz it was cliche man. But I still read the whole piece nevertheless.

the best line in the piece:
Raping is in my blood,so when I cum its like a fuckin flood
I`m like a horny stud,pimpin,actin like a tough fuckin thug

But it's still good man. It flows.

[BILI]

thx guys