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At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

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At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '09, 19:42

[Verse: Solace]
So I walked into this new club with my homie Spyder,
Pulled out a cig, begged his 8 legged ass for a lighter,
Started searching in the crowd, for them big double d's,
Tonight I erase my mistakes, I bet nothing can trouble me,
So my eyes started to stare at this mind blowing bitch,
Huge tits, tight ass, she could blow something else...my dick,
Walked up to her, ordered her a martini, and smirnoff for me,
So how good would this bitch look in stalkings gee,
So we mingle for a little, my dick itches for some company,
Fuck paying attention, all that I heard was muffled speak,
Took her out of the club, then we went to my apartment,
Turned off the lights, she started stripping in the darkness,
Gave me a little dance, I was in such a trance,
She started taking off my pants, my dick got hard like a lance,
Going to this club was my idea, I thought "I'm a genius!",
Then she smiled at me and that's when she pulled out her penis.

[Chorus: Solace]
In the heat of the moment, bitch get ready to get blowing,
Take off your clothes girl, get ready to give me a show and,
Let me rub your pussy, wait something hadn't felt right,
Confused until I found out I was about to fuck a transvestite.

[Bridge]
[Solace]
Yo Spyder. This shemale was goin fuck me man!
That shit was nasty as fuck! I couldn't take that shit
Just look out for a bulge alright?
[Spyder]
ight man, look im goin back to that club tonight
so ima get a chick back here, so knock if my doors closed
and ill look out for the dick.

[Verse:Spyder]
Im feelin fresh with all the bitches in the place
All these lips on my face, I got protection in case.
Scopin out the room, until I see this fine-ass-chick
Once I saw her booty, knew I had to get behind that bitch,
Walked up to her so smooth and spit a line out quick
As soon as she smiled I knew she wanted to try my dick.
So I bring her back to the pad, Solace wasn’t home
So I take off the phone, nothins stoppin us from bein alone.
Im in the zone, in a league of my own, im MVP
First rate im great, Lebron James would envy me.
Shes removes her top, I’m gettin ready to nail her
Start motor boatin that bitch, she callin me the sailor,
Im grabbin and squeezin, relaxin but pleasin, I feel wrong
So I take my hands quick and strip off her teal thong.
Just then the lights come on, “Solace I fuckin told you to knock”
“Spyder that’s the tranny I was with, just fuckin look at her cock.”
…..Damn

[Chorus: Solace]
In the heat of the moment, bitch get ready to get blowing,
Take off your clothes girl, get ready to give me a show and,
Let me rub your pussy, wait something hadn't felt right,
Confused until I found out I was about to fuck a transvestite.
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Spyder » Aug 14th, '09, 19:47

thanks Scotty :b:
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 14th, '09, 19:51

:laughing: great.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '09, 19:51

We're just dope like that, thanks for the comment :y:
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Wic Kid » Aug 14th, '09, 19:52

:y: :y: :y:
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 03:56

Why thank you.
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Spyder » Aug 15th, '09, 06:14

cough bump cough
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 15th, '09, 07:14

ahahaha it's fucking great :y: , especially the shock in Solace's last line in his verse :sweating:
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throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 15th, '09, 09:54

WHAT THE FUCK!!!! Both verses ended with trannies!!! :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

But :shadywink:

It's :coolthumb:

Love the whole thing man. Chorus was too simple though. Other than that, good job. =D>
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Re: At The Club (Feat. Spyder)

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 17:45

Thanks homies :sweating:
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