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Java Scriptures - Free Verse

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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby Xray » Aug 15th, '09, 16:17

i don't write rhymes, i type lines in Java Script

you aren't just unlucky motherfucka U-R an L

CRAZY lines.

That piece is 10/10, flow was dope and the lines were just funny and dope as fuck. :worship:
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby gutawafang » Aug 15th, '09, 16:50

Awesome man. Really really awesome. Like PERFECT wordplay man. It's like DAMN!!! :worship:

You've improved A LOT homie! :flower:
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby mcZu » Aug 15th, '09, 17:25

Dope, enough said.

You should keep this one, in case you ever record something :b:
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 17:44

That was damn good bro. I remember MC Anonymous did the same concept. Biter :shifty:

Just kidding lol keep that good shit up i loved it
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby mcZu » Aug 15th, '09, 17:47

Coleon wrote:thank you to everyone above :worship: I didn't think this piece would be that well reviewed but damn :y: thanks for the support

I am steppin up EVERY drop :y: top 5 CW is the quest bitches


Top 5 CW is a matter of opinion. With no doubt I dare to say that you are definitly one of the best lyricists on this board, period. Because as a fellow lyricist I recognize your skills.
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby mcZu » Aug 15th, '09, 17:49

Lol, I remember using that line, lmfao... And for the record, I used it waaay before Anon did. :sweating:
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 17:59

mcZu wrote:Lol, I remember using that line, lmfao... And for the record, I used it waaay before Anon did. :sweating:

Oh i didnt know that, sorry :whistle:
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Re: Java Scriptures - Free Verse

Postby BILI » Aug 15th, '09, 22:53

wow man thats fuckin awesome :y: :y: :y: :worship:
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