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wrote this in march

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 16th, '09, 00:41

Where am i going today, i'm slowly floating away
while growing's my pain so i know i'm not okay
cuz i'm showin my strain when my composure's to maintain
as a soldier i should regain my focus and remain
open, i may not notice always the point to be gained
or have the voice to explain every moment but i'll say
i hope that i may not disappoint and relay
good choices or i'd stay in the void
it's something no one wants to display
because dull like the color of grey
i wouldn't discover my emotions, oh they'd
be still covered under from exposure like clay
molded and i'd just complain shruggin my shoulders
feelin real ashamed...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: wrote this in march

Postby gutawafang » Aug 16th, '09, 06:36

I'ma say it's pretty okay compared to your usual skills.
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Re: wrote this in march

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 17th, '09, 05:24

i think i can fix this up
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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