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Medium Sermon

Postby mcZu » Aug 17th, '09, 19:33

If you listen to the BEAT I wrote to, it'll be easier to catch the flow.

Mercedes rappers, screaming ‘I A M G’//
Wannabees that lame, even blind eyes can see//
Your own rhymes even agree//
Your just a bunch of brainless-penises, unworthy and scary//
That’s why your definition should be dick-show-nary//
Your-done like mispronouncing mic with multiple dunks//
Imma be the prince of sayings, so back out the ride like multiple trunks//
Bunch of gullible chumps//
Imma revolutionary sharpened rap fusion, call me a Gillette//
You couldn’t double your share if you auotuned your singing duets//
So who’s next?//
Should I start dissing? Meaning ya’ll should start wishing//
Unburnable, not vulnerable, General on a mission//
Fully armed with wordplay and able//
To disable you with a simple diss while I enable//
Hip Hop’s further recovery with sickology on fire like coal facts//
That will leave you shocked like Cole McGrath//

Feedback appreciated.
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Re: Medium Sermon

Postby classthe_king » Aug 17th, '09, 23:26

Wordplay and nameplay were sick as usual, listening to the beat it was pretty easy to catch onto the flow. And it was a good flow. Good song overall.
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Re: Medium Sermon

Postby mcZu » Aug 18th, '09, 00:05

classthe_king wrote:Wordplay and nameplay were sick as usual, listening to the beat it was pretty easy to catch onto the flow. And it was a good flow. Good song overall.

Thanks Class :b:
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Re: Medium Sermon

Postby gutawafang » Aug 18th, '09, 10:44

classthe_king wrote:Wordplay and nameplay were sick as usual, listening to the beat it was pretty easy to catch onto the flow. And it was a good flow. Good song overall.

My sentiments too. Wordplay was :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Medium Sermon

Postby mcZu » Aug 20th, '09, 18:08

Thanks Guta :b:
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