lurk shadows (from March)

[Ka0t1c]

i've been lurkin in the shadows and you hadn't a clue
while surfin many channels up to the outskirts of youtube
but now i'm about to resurface this room in search of good news
or is it all worthless for this wordsmith, well i've surely been who's
worked on a few certain big tunes to return at our forum
but before i go with a boom under the earth as dirt where i'm tombed
warn the herds full of goons, i'm so berserk, i'm a loon
that flows with courage, from the soul until the circuit is through...

[macdaddy019967]

i would like to hear this on some audio it might help me to better understand it

[Ka0t1c]

well, maybe one day... i leave next week to hell for a year

[gutawafang]

LOL. That didn't flow well but maybe if you do an audio, you can explain how it does.

Good wordplay.

[macdaddy019967]

LOL. That didn't flow well but maybe if you do an audio, you can explain how it does.

Good wordplay.

word...the flow was what was messing with my head as well i was having trouble putting it together i thought it was just me lol

[Ka0t1c]

really? its full of multies

i've been lurkin in the shadows and you hadn't a clue
while surfin many channels up to the outskirts of youtube
but now i'm about to resurface this room in search of good news
or is it all worthless for this wordsmith, well i've surely been who's
worked on a few certain big tunes to return at our forum
but before i go with a boom under the earth as dirt where i'm tombed
warn the herds full of goons, i'm so berserk, i'm a loon
that flows with courage, from the soul until the circuit is through...

[gutawafang]

But Kaotic, no offense man, it's just an honest opinion. I mean, some aren't perfect multis.

[Ka0t1c]

i'm talking about the bolded parts and i know about how i rhyme...

[gutawafang]

i'm talking about the bolded parts and i know about how i rhyme...

Ok, I tried putting on a beat to flow to it. No doubt it does flow man.

[Ka0t1c]

ok, i wasn't sure if u noticed the bolded parts in my quoted lyrics, hope that helps somebody else out better too

[gutawafang]

ok, i wasn't sure if u noticed the bolded parts in my quoted lyrics, hope that helps somebody else out better too

Don't worry it does.