just a lil sumn (experimental)

[Ka0t1c]

i hate to burst your bubble
but i aint the first to trouble
cuz i came with a thirst no other
can claim, so huddle
you wanna take aim at me buddy
now it's about to get ugly
you shouldn't have opened up your mouth
oh how it's funny
just get to hoppin out little bunny
or your locked on target
i'm the hawk and you're the mouse
that's silly sonny
will anybody wanna pardon you for your remarks
before your killed from our house
watch where you park
your skills are far south
you're still softened putty
but we'll build ya, get help...

[gutawafang]

It's too simple but the flow's good cuz the structure is good. Kinda unique flow, actually.

[Ka0t1c]

thank you... yeah i used a lot of simple words on this... i'm just tryna see if ppl like my metaphors and abstract writing

[macdaddy019967]

It's too simple but the flow's good cuz the structure is good. Kinda unique flow, actually.

i feel the same way

[J Roc]

Hah it's coool for practise & keeping the rust off like oil ... but i saw better from u tho, Kaotic lol ... Rip it next timee .

[Ka0t1c]

yep, this is experimental