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Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

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Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby mcZu » Aug 18th, '09, 19:56

It's time for some lyrical crack ppl. But be carefull, we don't want you guys to OD.
Feedback appreciated as always.


Now We Say:
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With no further ado, I bring to you
..two of the best emcee's. Who?
None other than Coleon and Zu.

*Applause*

Emcee Zu:
I’m a hip hopper.
Guess I’m Brett Hopper, hard, never stop, beats fast
a sick doctor, pen the heat and bypass.
Lyrical fire, call this a diss charged author
infamous, yet shockingly good at slaughter…yes.
If you name me, your an offender
might as well call you Jarrod, ‘cause you’re a pretender.
Ya’ll half human half whores, yet I’m the centre
ya’ll circle ‘round me like a pair of compasses.
Though never near the masters
fakers like a blind guy wearing a pair of glasses.
Got a gold flow on the mic like Phelps is
you jack, son on the mic, your flow gotta beat it self, shit.
Hungry like a thin model, on fire like a fire work show and candles
Lyricist ‘till I die, pen the glow and smoke like camels
so in heaven I can brag ‘bout my ex pose like toes in sandals.
We got class like a Hopkins toast in mantles.
So, Cole, show them how we emcee’s grip the handle.

Chorus:
Now we say, now we say;
Listen closely, 'cause you might miss what we say. [2x]

Coleon:
This year MJ passed and it wasn't on a court
so I’m the King of Pop-ping fuckers well of course
busting with the force, designing ya demise
cause like road kill, ya lying in the lines.
Expire to the skies, and yo for the tip
I hate Carey N' A Cannon more than Slim.
See me standing wit ya bitch, nut in her face
Rickey Henderson the way I cut to third base.
I’m a nut wit wordplay, Webster should pay me
cause my pen it's first like the Yankees.
Coleon I spray heat, this kids an outsider
all ya lines are Rob Williams, I Doubtfire
my clouts hire, describe it when my pen inks.
My Sean Penn John Hancockin the Ben Sheets
no wonder I spit heat, of course it's Cole.
Leave ya lines outdated like a cordless phone.
Me and Zu are bold, he's MZ put an, h in between
if he let's it spurt, it MHz, get what I mean?

Chorus:
Now we say, now we say;
Listen closely, 'cause you might miss what we say. [2x]
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby BILI » Aug 18th, '09, 20:01

That was pretty cool :y: :y:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby Solace » Aug 18th, '09, 20:04

Pretty cool? Hell nah that was dope! I didn't read through with the beat but regardless I think I caught the flow and I enjoyed that shit :y:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby D'Leh » Aug 18th, '09, 20:04

nice drop guys! :y:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 18th, '09, 21:00

yeah very good verse coleon, i liked yours too mczu, nice piece :y: :flower:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby mcZu » Aug 18th, '09, 22:24

Thanks for the feed people. :b: :b: :b: :b:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby classthe_king » Aug 18th, '09, 23:10

Holy shit :worship: . Im with Solace that was fucking dope. Both of your wordplay/nameplay was fire. I didn't even need the beat to catch on to the flow. Coleon's My Sean Penn John Hancockin the Ben Sheets, was dope as fuck. Both of you brought it.
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 19th, '09, 12:55

*thump falls to the floor from OD...lol well oddly enough I like the chorus the best...maybe cause I enjoy a good hook cause I know how hard it is to come up with a good one. Good drop
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby mcZu » Aug 19th, '09, 17:08

Thanks guys, appreciate the feed :b:

And you came hard as well Cole (Pause) :smoking:
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby classthe_king » Aug 19th, '09, 23:26

Coleon wrote:@Class, ours will be up soon


iite hope to see it.
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby mcZu » Aug 25th, '09, 20:36

B to the U.M.P.
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby D-Smith01 » Sep 3rd, '09, 16:20

kinda lame..the punchlines anyway...step ya game up zu
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby mcZu » Sep 3rd, '09, 17:21

D-Smith01 wrote:kinda lame..the punchlines anyway...step ya game up zu


If you can't comprehend shit, don't comment. But thanks anyway.
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby D-Smith01 » Sep 3rd, '09, 19:53

no,i understood the punchlines..they were just weak...
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Re: Emcee Zu - Now We Say ft. Coleon

Postby mcZu » Sep 3rd, '09, 20:00

D-Smith01 wrote:no,i understood the punchlines..they were just weak...


Okay, thanks for checking it out anyways.
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