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black town

Postby drasticlyhated » Aug 19th, '09, 06:14

im not quick to back down from battles i cant handle
unless i absolutly have to i need to set an example
call up my homies yea they got my back
i stay peirced with a 7 inch knife and i roll with 2 straps
what influence my raps?all this daily shit instead of sittin
and startin to reminiss and write raps to diss
all those who step in my house with they dried up jizz
im sick of this shit you quick to back down run away
from a smack down omars big ass is built like a black town
and boom got the strap shit drastic pulled the mack out you ready boys?
hell yea lets get blacked out im like a fuckin animal i cant control my feeling
once we hit you once your mind starts realing like a fishin rod up your ass
that aint got no bait shit just hit your intestons and began to rape,you from
the inside to the fuckin out we gone fuck you up so bad ya dicks gone be your snout

this is not a freestyle trying to be reacist if anyone took it that way but tell me whut you guys think
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: black town

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 19th, '09, 06:32

ok, i liked it, had some pretty good lines, but what is with the eminem shit?? :o didn't like that, but the rest was aight :D
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throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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