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Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

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Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 19th, '09, 07:23

I wrote this song about a girl who broke my heart...this girl kept me hurt for a while and actually the second I finished this song I felt free from her bitch spell...enjoy


Oh baby,
Come take me to the course,
But I lost my way,
And the rain comes down,
Lost you're way and the rain comes down,

Here's a story of lady and the tramp,
she gave me heartache is it maybe a cramp,
I hate love cause it starts fast,
and will dart past,
your common sense and tells your heartll last,
so here's a story of a girl spoiled by a smartass,
so where to start,
How about how Amelia was the heir to my heart,
She filled my sky with stars,
And to get to her I'd fly to mars,
Corny but I wanted to make her mine,
Even if I had to take my time,
She was the air to my lungs,
The plunge to my fall,
The fall to my spring,
The spring to my sprung,
The sing to my sung,
Maybe I'm just being dumb,
But if I seem numb,
Its because my dreams come, 20
Chorus

I should of kissed you by the bonfire,
But I was so nervous I could have missed and gone higher,
And kissed your forehead,
For some reason her lips were more red,
Then if an apple core bled,
But anyway I'm getting sidetracked,
She used to laugh at every joke I tried and cracked,
I guess she was my unique breeze,
That creeps through trees,
And just whisper gives me weak knees,
And it seems dumb,
But I think my dreams come,
One touch gives me shaky knees,
One look makes me freeze,
All emotions rush to my head,
A look into her eyes makes me blush red,
Remember the time we were on the phone all night,
And said what about tomorrow you'll call right,
Chorus

She brought me sweet dreams but also nightmares,
Her final words to this day makes me fight tears,
You told me I need to grow a pair,
What did I not do to show I care,
Was it all those times on the phone I said Amelia so I know your there,
I started crying but it was like a tear landing in the oceon,
My mind wasn't planning this emotion,
She was my rainbow after grey skies,
But as soon as she left my day dies,
As short as the lifetime of mayflies,
But just as clay dries,
I want amelia to know that her prey cries,
They say lies sway guys,
to stick with their girl and stay wise,
Well girl ill never forget you broke my heart,
But I love you I wish you wrote that part,
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Re: Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 19th, '09, 11:46

Dope verse :y: I could relate to it.

Btw, where is J Pearson :unsure:
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Re: Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 19th, '09, 14:33

Yo man I think alotta of people can really relate to that one. Real presonal. Dug it alot man one of those kinds of songs you can kinda sink in to. Nice song homie
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Re: Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 20th, '09, 04:26

thanks everybody :wave:
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Re: Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 20th, '09, 04:49

Pretty good, read all of it. Some deep lines here and there. :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 20th, '09, 13:31

gutawafang wrote:Pretty good, read all of it. Some deep lines here and there. :y: :y: :y:

Thanks for the feedback man
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Re: Fa-Q - Rain Comes Down (some J. Pearson shit)

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 23rd, '09, 19:42

Oh there was something hidden in this...when I said "Amelia the heir to my heart" that was on purpose like amelia aereheart...I think that's how its spelled
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