word play and multies

[Wreck]

illest to touch the mic, even when I'm wrong, I'm fucking right
Bust-in-wives, touching knives, that'll cut inside...
can you Bust a Rhyme? or Mase a Puffy...maybe 50 (5-0) 'em?
There's a drug-inside, this case is ugly...I think it's lithium
I drop Nick Cannon's, eat MCs like Tim-Salmon
I tit-Janet, 4 tat...STDS vs. Ireland Famine
I stay panicked, the type to bite prey, frantic
and the one to play bandit, you gay's just can't stand it
camping out, while I'm handing out pamphlets to crowds
on pricks that you can't stand now, with their fucking hands-in their towels
jerking off to Jerky Boys, that's what they call it "Mercy" for
but they ignore me, while they Akon go "Up and Down" 30 more
I'll slaughter your illegitimate daughter, lyrically
cut off her head, and wrap it in the present you brought for her, fucking fearing me
you never heard of the ICP-esque, wicked fuck?
Listen bruh, your wrists spit blood, while all this time I'm dissin ya
I check letters, your in check-through checkers, put to the test, remember?
through Wreck's letters, I'm on the ball like a fucking rec. center

[J Roc]

Lmao .. @ Everybody all suddenly getting into Punchline shit & wordplay shit . wtf . lol

[J Roc]

Lmao .. @ Everybody all suddenly getting into Punchline shit & wordplay shit . wtf . lol

lol ever since you invented it

haha no but ... When i first started using it . it went over Everybody's head . they didn't know wtf a punch wass . people was like "i voet for the other dude cause J roc's punches i had to think about" .. even iff the other dude didn't have any .

It's sort of a kick in the ball's now that EVERYBODY does it lol .

[Wreck]

i've been fucking with multis for awhile now, what y'all talking about? just because it's a fad going around this site, don't mean nothing lol.

[Wreck]

Lmao .. @ Everybody all suddenly getting into Punchline shit & wordplay shit . wtf . lol

lol ever since you invented it

haha no but ... When i first started using it . it went over Everybody's head . they didn't know wtf a punch wass . people was like "i voet for the other dude cause J roc's punches i had to think about" .. even iff the other dude didn't have any .

It's sort of a kick in the ball's now that EVERYBODY does it lol .

most hip hop artists use multis and punchs. you didn't invent it man. and it's not like an invention, where if somebody pattens it, nobody else can use it. it's punchlines, and multis lol. Anybody can use em.

[Xray]

you're like a Rakim, you brought it here now everyone else gets props for it lol

Becareful, you might raise his boner and get put on his sig. Since his the Cassidy of this rap shit.

[Wreck]

how about y'all just tell me what you think of the shit, instead of talking about who gets a boner, if somebody else spits a punchline first? lol.

seriously, if j-rock was the first punchline rapper on this site, that's cool, but it's universal shit.

Edit: yeah I seen Coleon. But this isn't J-Rock's thread. I just want some feed lol. I don't care about who had it first, honestly man.

[J Roc]

most hip hop artists use multis and punchs. you didn't invent it man. and it's not like an invention, where if somebody pattens it, nobody else can use it. it's punchlines, and multis lol. Anybody can use em.

i know Duke i ain't saying anything offensive . i'm just pointing ouot , Everybody's all suddenly on it at the same time . Churrchh

[Wreck]

most hip hop artists use multis and punchs. you didn't invent it man. and it's not like an invention, where if somebody pattens it, nobody else can use it. it's punchlines, and multis lol. Anybody can use em.

i know Duke i ain't saying anything offensive . i'm just pointing ouot , Everybody's all suddenly on it at the same time . Churrchh

lol aight man, it's all good then. can I have some feed though? maybe sometime we could battle. i seen your battles, and your punchs are nice. hit me up if you rap too.

[Xray]

Aight my bad for spamming in here, but that dude is mad cocky. Anyways I thought it was good, some dope lines that flowed really good. Keep it up.

[Wreck]

Aight my bad for spamming in here, but that dude is mad cocky. Anyways I thought it was good, some dope lines that flowed really good. Keep it up.

It's all good brother. Lol aight. Thanks for the feed man, I appreciate it. Just trying to improve, drop after drop, honestly . Props and thank you.

[J Roc]

Can i get some feed

iiiight

illest to touch the mic, even when I'm wrong, I'm fucking right
Bust-in-wives, touching knives, that'll cut inside...
can you Bust a Rhyme? or Mase a Puffy...maybe 50 (5-0) 'em?
There's a drug-inside, this case is ugly...I think it's lithium
I drop Nick Cannon's, eat MCs like Tim-Salmon
I tit-Janet, 4 tat...STDS vs. Ireland Famine
I stay panicked, the type to bite prey, frantic
and the one to play bandit, you gay's just can't stand it
camping out, while I'm handing out pamphlets to crowds
on pricks that you can't stand now, with their fucking hands-in their towels
jerking off to Jerky Boys, that's what they call it "Mercy" for
but they ignore me, while they Akon go "Up and Down" 30 more
I'll slaughter your illegitimate daughter, lyrically
cut off her head, and wrap it in the present you brought for her, fucking fearing me
you never heard of the ICP-esque, wicked fuck?
Listen bruh, your wrists spit blood, while all this time I'm dissin ya
I check letters, your in check-through checkers, put to the test, remember?
through Wreck's letters, I'm on the ball like a fucking rec. center

hah iiight .. Feed uhhh . it's Decent .... some played shit i don't like but its iight filler, most drop's has it . some new stuff ... some Multies i dug ... Actually some of the rhyme's was Real Smoooth haha .

Uhh practise make's perfect .... i'm a lil burned outt so maybe all that's just cuz i'm tired ^^ . Chiiill drop though .

your punchs are nice

Naw .. they just some lightwork bar's . i dun like battling on forum's it takes from my internet-swagger haha .

[Wreck]

wreck you need to calm the fuck down lol

and some good looks in this one, kinda roughly put together but all your punches had good ideas behind them

good drop keep it up like viagra son

i know, I'm always going crazy lol...

and thanks for the feed fam, appreciated..

lol aight I will, good looks....

[Wreck]

illest to touch the mic, even when I'm wrong, I'm fucking right
Bust-in-wives, touching knives, that'll cut inside...
can you Bust a Rhyme? or Mase a Puffy...maybe 50 (5-0) 'em?
There's a drug-inside, this case is ugly...I think it's lithium
I drop Nick Cannon's, eat MCs like Tim-Salmon
I tit-Janet, 4 tat...STDS vs. Ireland Famine
I stay panicked, the type to bite prey, frantic
and the one to play bandit, you gay's just can't stand it
camping out, while I'm handing out pamphlets to crowds
on pricks that you can't stand now, with their fucking hands-in their towels
jerking off to Jerky Boys, that's what they call it "Mercy" for
but they ignore me, while they Akon go "Up and Down" 30 more
I'll slaughter your illegitimate daughter, lyrically
cut off her head, and wrap it in the present you brought for her, fucking fearing me
you never heard of the ICP-esque, wicked fuck?
Listen bruh, your wrists spit blood, while all this time I'm dissin ya
I check letters, your in check-through checkers, put to the test, remember?
through Wreck's letters, I'm on the ball like a fucking rec. center

hah iiight .. Feed uhhh . it's Decent .... some played shit i don't like but its iight filler, most drop's has it . some new stuff ... some Multies i dug ... Actually some of the rhyme's was Real Smoooth haha .

Uhh practise make's perfect .... i'm a lil burned outt so maybe all that's just cuz i'm tired ^^ . Chiiill drop though .

Thanks for the feed! Good looks J.

Haha aight

[Ka0t1c]

i liked some of it but that's pretty much cuz i wasn't feeling the direction of the piece