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one of my newest verses..High Times. recorded

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one of my newest verses..High Times. recorded

Postby Boston » Aug 24th, '09, 21:52

i got exotic weed, piff n kush, cant spot a seed/
quick to push the christmas look, must be grown hyphonically/
did i say hyphonically? i just mean the hydro/
phonics, twist i roll, hittin blizzes till i die slow/
chinky vision eyes swole, shut but shit did i know/
all these different drugs i need to stop before i vio/
late n go to trial, probation hoping i will/
stop this potent stuff n sober up then close my file/
i just smoke another blunt, now to see my P.O/
please man not another flunk, my urine has this green glow/
go to jail, not me no, choking, pale, this weed smoke/
you would have to drag me off, it knocked me off my feet so/
quick n suddenly oh, shit now stop here we go/
now another three ro- tation, hit it, ease slow/
just for smoking these o's, with my three amigos/
spendin money all on bud explains which why that hes broke/

a verse i wrote to this song i just recorded with my boy.. if u want to hear that verse recorded its in the audio section...lemme kno wat ya think of da verse

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Re: one of my newest verses..High Times. recorded

Postby D'Leh » Aug 24th, '09, 22:00

nice shit man really sick man!!!! :y: if you can feed me with you comments ... :y:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: one of my newest verses..High Times. recorded

Postby classthe_king » Aug 24th, '09, 23:00

Wow, i really liked that verse, now ill go check it in audio
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: one of my newest verses..High Times. recorded

Postby Boston » Aug 25th, '09, 12:36

good looks^
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