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twisted mind. (new verse)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 26th, '09, 08:10

hood bitches, sluts and hoes thinking they good christians
then go licking huge dicks from dope dealers with no base hit
common face it, every place and event youre pussy's getting played with
by some dudes you just met and lord knows what else they did with it
cause youre so fucking wasted you don't even know who's bithday is it
don't give a shit who's friend is it or with what boyfriend you is with
and this scene goes to all you pre-teen hoes, common girl take off your clothes
so i can stick my dick in between those and your man don't need to know
that just shows to some of ya'll who still wanna love them hoes
you better note these flows as if they were your very own's
how many housewife whores have men over at their homes
while their husbands broke their bones working all night long , huh?
man that's just wrong but i aint the one they wanna mess with
i smack 'em in the face shit and i ain't even gonna stress it
blood stains, spray brains all over the place like graffity wall paint, veins drained
from a severe throat gash while you drown in blood with your vocal chords slashed,
bitch, you damn right misoginistic, i'm just a sick minded misfit
Grab you by the neck and twist it, now Rest in Peace just like your sister.(haha)
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Re: twisted mind. (new verse)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 27th, '09, 03:27

Fucking twisted mind!!! :o :o :o

I totally loved it. All the lines were awesome. :y:
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Re: twisted mind. (new verse)

Postby Xray » Aug 27th, '09, 06:34

Haha that's ill man. Flow was really good, and I liked the rhymes a lot.

Good shit bro, keep it coming. :y:
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Re: twisted mind. (new verse)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 28th, '09, 03:19

thanks for the support guys :flower:
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