Never Give Up

[King Bullet]

This is just a first verse:

Lot of doubts is what they gave me,''your fault'' is how they tried to slave me.
They tried to play me,take my soul and tried to tame me,
this is my portray and it's frame and they can't reframe me.
I do what I do and I don't give a fuck just blame me.
That hate is what I try to ignore,success is what I try to go-for,
I don't stop 'till I die and it's no more,do what you do but no small talk.
Just more walk,and I really see no walls,it all goes away as the doors close.
Ignorance makes me so bored,and it makes me say: ''Oh,Lord,
tell me how to go forward''...

Tell me what ya' think...

[BILI]

its pretty good,flowed good,rhymes were simple but still good,and not to complex but I like when emotional stuff isnt 2 complex,good drop man


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[King Bullet]

Thanx man. I left you feed on that song.peace