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Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Xray » Aug 27th, '09, 06:20

My smoke annihilatin', my verbal, violatin'
rhymes speak for generations, Sajjad regeneratin'
assassinatin' presidents, freemason inspirations
new world order, but my handshakes iller
dramatised, unified, get the plies
pull the flight from your life, now you can't
fucking claim, your fly anymore, whoa.
inspired now? hell no, happened a decade ago
1.9.9.0, when faggot rappers didn't blow
and had no intentions to show
those wack ass lyrics and claim they lyrical
you better keep to that 2 step, cause 3rd steps death
cause you fly motherfuckers ain't shit but insects
I'm the pest controller, no bugs taking over
insect repellent, cockroaches rolling over
Unified weaponry, sajjad and ax-d, were doing them illegally (heist!)


Just wrote this, its for a collab, let me know what ya think.
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 27th, '09, 06:27

i liked it man , especiialy the part with the freemasons :y:
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Xray » Aug 27th, '09, 06:35

Thanks man, I returned feed. :b:
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 27th, '09, 07:21

you better keep to that 2 step, cause 3rd steps death


thats a sick bar homes, i need to listen to the beat, this has a realy intresting flow :y:
sick shit
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Drama Setter » Aug 27th, '09, 09:04

another great drop from SaJaad My fav Underground boi , Thx bro .
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Xray » Aug 27th, '09, 09:48

Thanks for the feed, I just finished mixing my verse. Now just gotta wait for Ax-D's parts :smoking:
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 27th, '09, 10:20

Xray wrote:Thanks for the feed, I just finished mixing my verse. Now just gotta wait for Ax-D's parts :smoking:


it's hot bro ,, can't wait to hear the song ,, :)
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 18:18

Illegally heist

oh i see whut u did thar :shifty:

Lmao good piece man I can't wait for the audio. You should drop more shit in CW too you know
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby mcZu » Aug 27th, '09, 18:39

Dope drop Sajjad. Love the Fly/Insect line. Can't say much 'bout the flow w/out a beat, 'cause you pull out the dopest flows on a beat and on paper they don't flow well, lol. Can't wait to hear this. :b:
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 27th, '09, 20:59

go download this fucking track on the audio section bitchessss!!!!
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Spyder » Aug 27th, '09, 21:51

i love the shit about the fly and insects thing too :D
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Xray » Aug 28th, '09, 04:23

Thanks for the feedback peeps appreciate it. :worship:
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '09, 05:02

Big Ax-D wrote:go download this fucking track on the audio section bitchessss!!!!

its not even released yet :whistle:
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby D'Leh » Aug 28th, '09, 19:23

sick just sick :y:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Fuck Them Fly Ass Rappers (New 16)

Postby Emadyville » Aug 28th, '09, 19:30

emzee-frenzy wrote:i liked it man , especiialy the part with the freemasons :y:


yeah that was dope, i liked your rhyme scheme on this how it changed up and shit, overall it was a solid 16, good work :y:
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