Non-fictional feedback would be appreciated.Thank you.
I'm white and I rap so it's good that I got this far,
sensitive ears will in a second spot this bar,
defending my image,plus the trouble,shit it caught me hard.
I'm cold outside,but the blood is hot at heart.
Not too complexive,cause I want everyone to to understand and feel my message.
Cause it's not easy to stand when they heat this pressure.
Confidently I state that I'm better than half of rappers out there,
they jealous,so soon as I spit my shit they say they doubt that.
What do I gotta do to make you feel this pain?
I'm not a gangsta,not a thug,I'm not dealin' 'caine.
I'm just a kid from the 'burbs,willin' respect and willin' fame.
Another Eminem they say,man they kill my brain,
cause we not the same,only playin' cards in the same game.
I'm slightly goin' insane,how big picture do I gotta paint just to fit this frame?
It's really crazy the way they see me,askin' me why do I spit this way.
I'm bout to pitch this blade,so you better watch how you git this tape,
I'm sick of that shit,so I adress it and flip this page,
not mad anymore cause I'm ending that shift of rage.
Time to cut the shit and spit some flames...
P.S.-I posted the snippet,it's called Lonely At The Top.I added one more,Pen Bleedin'.Check it out on myspace http://www.myspace.com/rapdogg13 [sorry for the quality,but myspace just keeps fuckin up the quality of my songs...dunno why...]
But yeah keep it up with the multies
