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Re: SoMeDaY

Postby gutawafang » Aug 28th, '09, 08:52

good calculations of the syllables, which in turn made it flow. repetition of words means it's the chorus. but too much "ain't gonna". LOL.

I like its simplicity and innocence. Enough said. It's fucking poetic I must say. :flower:
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