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I Here Them Calling

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I Here Them Calling

Postby Cookzee » Aug 28th, '09, 00:05

rap isn't just rap no more
it's got spirits
and gimmicks who think up lyrics
when they can't even live it
i do whatever i say i do
i don't bullshit
i don't even try and pull shit on you
but if motherfuckers keep talking
ill quit walking, like stephen hawkings
an load a full clip on you
i aint boasting, im not even roastin
just coastin, i'm ressurect from the dead
you said im a ghost that's like casper
coz people think im too nice to hurt
come gimme a reason, i'll show you what im worth
sure i'd prefer, it if we all just got a long
but ever since i got a song
u went got a hard-on
wait, let's pull it back, too much distraction from that
guess who's back motherfuckers, try attack this track
with Kid Cudi, it's not enough funny, i've stopped falling
im crawling back to the top, i hear them calling ( Coooooookkzeeee HAHA!)

Verse 2:

i get of stage, i head for the brown door
i can't hear my thoughts, coz i hear the crowd roar
they want more?, they all there shouting ( Encore)
i don't think i can do this, god am i sore
whats wrong with me, why do i let my fans down
they know my background better than some friends hands down
i guess im scared, i wud never imagine
that somin great would come from hate
but that's what went an happened
now it's time to get up, step up
never let up
shred em cookzee get em
make em regret they set up
one of the best
in the making
this times mine for the taking
if you care disagree....take me
im right here, sittin on my throne
proud to show off, i did it on my own
i am well and truly, raps self proclaimed king
you'd be one to if you'd step in the same ring! (until then)


recording this tomorrow :) what do you guys think
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Re: I Here Them Calling

Postby Cookzee » Aug 28th, '09, 09:59

Bump :shifty:
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Re: I Here Them Calling

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 28th, '09, 10:09

imo it seems like your writing this from eminems point of view :unsure:
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Re: I Here Them Calling

Postby Cookzee » Aug 29th, '09, 00:01

coz i am lmao

just i've been through a similar experience so i can reflect on it, it's sentimental to me
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Re: I Here Them Calling

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 29th, '09, 11:31

enjoyed reading it ,, try to be more creative next time , like increase the vocab , write some creative lines,, make it look nice, flowed well . but it's a good try .. keep doing your staff
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