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Why oh Why oh why ...

Postby J Roc » Aug 30th, '09, 09:43

You Don't Touch Metal, You Couldn't 'Pop' a Blood Vessel
And i pin ur girl all the time when we Tongue 'Wrestle' ... ;)
And When the Smoke is Cleared ... And When ur Lungs Settled
i'll Pull out Another Gun & Make u Hot as Hell like Some Devil
I Mastered the Game u Need Help With More Than One Level
u Wun't Pull out the heat..like your On Vacation?
To all These Wannabe Rappers : "I Beat You To The Punch" And i'll Drop Ya Face Bitch
Shit i'll 'Beat the crap outta you' even if your constipated... lol
Heat-a-Build-Up I Need-To-kill-Ya I Don't Even Feel Obligated
Dummy left me in charge of his bills Like i Can't Rob It??
Ask Me For The Cash? Lost It...But i Got a Stack Stashed In My Ass Pocket :smoking:
J the hood Cat, Where Are You.. Turn Around? But I Never Look Back
Repping the East Side, Dating a Girl That'll Go 'South' Like T.I
Throwing up the Peace Sign, Call it a Hat Trick when i Shoot ur Head 3 Times
You See J? I'll Rob ya "Purse, Suit" Like a High Speed Chase (Pursuit)
Won't Even Bleed Mayne Cause Ya'll More Pussy Then Lesbian 3 Ways
Fuck those Bars that u Text, u only got Cars on the net...Yes u E-Race
But my lines so ill ... There Isn't 1 of them i could Erase...


:staticsmoking: ... Just a Lyrical Workout
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Re: Why oh Why oh why ...

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 30th, '09, 11:52

it's a good drop , i enjoyed reading it .. you have some good multies and punshes here and here ,,., keep them comming ,, :y:
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