Lyrical Murderer

[mcZu]

Why not, lyrically murder these noobs w/ a side shot
‘bout to turn them cold, call ‘em Noob Saibot
It’s quite, not quiet, but a strike knot, see
Aint talking ‘bout Inglorious basterds victims
Rather ask for a placement w/ a corny basilisk bashing quake like Richter
Than battling me, ‘cause I’ll break like 26 bones and 33 joints on a pedal
Lyrically I’m beyond a gold medal
Fuck you up like you was Meadow on a classic piano
I’m fierce and deadly like the R of the Soprano’s
I’m a physical manifestation of a lyrical biblical miracle saturation
I’m flyer than ya’ll, call me a faster Nathan
Stop talking ‘bout beating me like masturbation
They dying to beef, I tell ‘em meet w/ the butcher on a cemetery, yo
Leave you w/ double vision like that split screen in Kutcher’s seventy show
This is how a lyrical assassin rolls
Armed w/ sinful, tactical, animal like tact that strikes like Cole McGrath
Leave enemies in a Kevin Ollie state
‘cause I sign my victims w/ thunder, no wonder I still amaze
I’m a beast, hungry for days ‘cause
Ya‘ll know I trill people like Bun B’s LP does

Feedback appreciated.

[Fa-Q]

lol that masterbation line was dope....interesting concept....maybe make a song with straight punchlines no hook or nothing

[mcZu]

Thanks Fa-Q.

And I've done that in the past. Maybe I'll turn this one into one as well.

[mcZu]

^Thanks Cole, yeah, I wrote it to the same beat.

[D'Leh]

awesome dude

[Slim Zaddy]

damn,, sick verse man,, dope multies ,, and lyrics are just great,, keep them comming homie

[Relapse.LP]

Awesome concept, but I think the rhyming scheme could be more complex with more internals and better multies.

LMAO at Coleon's signature. You ready to battle me yet? I beat MC Anon, homie 5-2.

[mcZu]

awesome dude

Thanks Zurdo, appreciate it

damn,, sick verse man,, dope multies ,, and lyrics are just great,, keep them comming homie

Thanks Zaddy, I will.

Awesome concept, but I think the rhyming scheme could be more complex with more internals and better multies.

Thanks Da.relapse.lp, and yeah, I know what you mean. However, the beat I wrote to asked for this. It would fuck up the flow if it would have too much multies and internals.

[classthe_king]

Dope shit , what beat did you use for this, just curious.

[mcZu]

Dope shit , what beat did you use for this, just curious.

Thanks Class.

Slaughterhouse - Lyrical Murderers

[classthe_king]

Dope shit , what beat did you use for this, just curious.

Thanks Class.

Slaughterhouse - Lyrical Murderers

Lmao! Should have guessed that. Just wanted to see how you flowed to the beat so I could improve my flow

[mcZu]

^Hahaha, a'ight.

[gutawafang]

I can't catch the flow. Prolly because of structure.

But the punchlines there are pretty good man.

This is good:
Than battling me, ‘cause I’ll break like 26 bones and 33 joints on a pedal

Love the title.

[mcZu]

^Thanks Guta