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I Still Don't Give A Fuck!

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I Still Don't Give A Fuck!

Postby Cookzee » Aug 30th, '09, 23:29

i wrote this over Eminem's beat, i think it's pretty good tbh share your thoughts on it:

im a 2pac talking, im walking like i was a dead
this wallets big like chris wallace, wanna bet?
*o how he's gonna mention biggie and pac
he aint black he's whack, but i think he forgot*
i aint forgot no, i consider myself picaso
of rap music, i aint using no pot smoke
so lets tune in, i hope you keep your gob closed
u assholes got shit on me, start from the top GO
you could say im overweight, nick name me chunky
call me ugly, i'd run away if somone jumped me
im a pussy? because i came from the country
i lived in a city, i aint pretty, no-one wants me
you could even describe the way i dress
you could talk about how when i rhyme i don't make sense
but until you fags can beat me at rap, your just punks
and i can say what i want because i just don't give a fuck
survival is taught by the survivors, not by those who benefitted.
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Re: I Still Don't Give A Fuck!

Postby Cookzee » Aug 30th, '09, 23:38

no posts?
survival is taught by the survivors, not by those who benefitted.
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Re: I Still Don't Give A Fuck!

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 30th, '09, 23:42

it was just ok...but for future reference NEVER mention Eminem about your shit (i know you just said you wrote it over SDGaF) but still man...but ok drop...id give it a six
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Re: I Still Don't Give A Fuck!

Postby D'Leh » Aug 31st, '09, 00:54

it was ok, keep it coming! :y:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: I Still Don't Give A Fuck!

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 31st, '09, 08:12

it was aight man but keep practicing :flower:
"misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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