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What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

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What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Relapse.LP » Aug 31st, '09, 02:08

To this beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=496RduAoX7E

(Verse 1)
What goes around comes around, how, so listen now/
To this underground profound sound I now found/
These drugs, this greed, these slugs, this weed/
It's all poison hoisted into the loins of man's seed/
Jealousy and envy, sisters of our demise, no lies/
My nigger dead from those bitches, dead with closed eyes, so why/
This plaguing our moral basics and no one saving our poor old nation/
Muslim wars, don't trust them more cause they no careless terrorists/
Racists, fake merits, and fucked up parents/
Ruining this country, sunny days gone, everything for money now/
Materialistic, imperial strict shit running the world now/
Religious pictures inflict shit on non-fictitious victims, sick of this shit, so listen/
911 was just the beginning of this killing/
Imagine the US in a million years; it's chilling/
Motherfuckers still struggling daily, the wealthy still fucking daily, maybe/
Lady Mary ain't with us no more, society filled with sluts and whores/

(Chorus x2)
So what goes around will come around eventually/
The passion and fire of man will die in a century/
With this smoke of sins tinting the air, tinting our lungs/
We'll all see hell, one day, dead from our brother's gun/

(Verse 2)
America was founded on unity, soon to be/
The mother country, people coming like running honey/
But look at Rome, fuckers, now look at the country we call home/
See the resemblance? Our sentence to hell has already begun to commence, so/
In one year, we'd stay the same, multiply that by ten, we're fucked; this fame/
Is cruel, but we're just fools lost in rules; tools in Satan's craze in chess games/
They say we paved the way for generations/
Man, our government is just fucking with our patience/
How long will we be suspended/
On this rope of hope that Jesus lended/
Let's just end this, pull the trigger, go figure/
If a nigger would like this rigor or even bigger/
What happened to the peace? Why'd it cease, at least tell me/
The Bible ain't a scripture now, it's a picture of sick wars for what possibly/
Selfish bitches and friendly-faking snakes makes up our social pyramid/
The devil in our country's ear, it's clear we all have a death fear and.../

(Bridge)
Yo, it's all poison, motherfuckers.
This money, this fame, this game.
It's all fucking poison put in your minds by the media and shit.
This country is fucking with our minds, our self-esteem.
This racism going on right now, it's all poison.
All this shit is poison.

(Verse 3)
Look, Prometheus granted us fire which was required for us to rise higher/
Lord Zeus, who deemed the Titan a liar, punished us for his dire desires/
Created Pandora, handed over a jar of sins; our hell, from there, begins, bitches/
Curiosity made her want to be a slave to her wishes, which is far from riches/
Took a peek to seek what? A field of evil sealed in trios/
We're all cursed, hurts to admit it, it's real sad isn't it?/
I'ma say it mercilessly: we're all bitches to feed our needy greed/
To free ourselves from the seed that's making us more weak/
Look at the hood; it's a daily struggle in mainly rubble with niggers warring/
Hollywood is a different story, sip some glory with money pouring/
Don't deny it, I'm not lying, think you're the flyest? Who you kidding?/
If you doubt me, motherfucker, just take a look at the conditions you live in/
The pollution of the Cardinal sins is the conclusion of our arsenal weapons/
Fighting Iraq for oil and embroil ourselves in their own toils?/
The world is fucked, see, we're just lucky/
That God hasn't struck us down with lightning/

(Chorus x2) (Whispers)
So what goes around will come around eventually/
The passion and fire of man will die in a century/
With this smoke of sins tinting the air, tinting our lungs/
We'll all see hell, one day, dead from our brother's gun/

(Verse 4)
The plantation owners' crave of slavery paved the way for their graves/
The hate of the slaves was like an hurricane with the North giving aid/
Traded lives for lives in the Civil War; bravery was their savior/
Give or take the lives that they gave and the lives with knives that they slayed/
No shit is eternal, so if you forfeit you will/
Surrender your soul to hell, Devil's delight trapped in a light-less cell/
Seven sins committed today, seven punishments written today/
Seven times you'll regret the lies and try to redeem yourself and pray/
Yo, it's all poison, their choices destroy us like Troy did/
Yo, it's all poison, the government voices destruction for enjoyment/
It's all poison: this love, this hate, these mindless emotions/
It's all poison: our medicine, the wretched invention of Edison/
It's all poison: life, liberty, and the fantasy of happiness/
It's all poison: friends, their offending ends, and the family crest/
It's all poison: education, schools, and their foolish rules/
It's all poison: temples, its priests, and their sacred jewel/

(Chorus x4)
So what goes around will come around eventually/
The passion and fire of man will die in a century/
With this smoke of sins tinting the air, tinting our lungs/
We'll all see hell, one day, dead from our brother's gun/

(Outro)
Damn… It’s all poison…

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Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Robbie G » Aug 31st, '09, 02:19

That was dope. :y:

I was half paying attention when I clicked on it from the main page and I thought it was a Nas song. :sweating:
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 31st, '09, 02:45

Coleon wrote:you're about as creative as Terry Shaivo post death


Now that was a dick move...
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Relapse.LP » Aug 31st, '09, 02:46

Coleon wrote:you bit Nas's style so fuckin bad

it was Nas minus good rhyming

you're about as creative as Terry Shaivo post death


LOL. You told me that Nas sucks though? You probably haven't even read my lyrics if you thought I bit Nas "so fuckin bad." Well, it wouldn't make a difference, because the only hip hop you listen to is Eminem anyways.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 31st, '09, 02:52

da.relapse.lp wrote:
Coleon wrote:you bit Nas's style so fuckin bad

it was Nas minus good rhyming

you're about as creative as Terry Shaivo post death


LOL. You told me that Nas sucks though? You probably haven't even read my lyrics if you thought I bit Nas "so fuckin bad." Well, it wouldn't make a difference, because the only hip hop you listen to is Eminem anyways.


Dude are you an idiot.

1. You have the name of Eminem's album in your Name
2. He has Nas in his Sig
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Relapse.LP » Aug 31st, '09, 02:54

He could have shit in his signature and it doesn't mean shit. I could have DMC in my signature and bump De La Soul. Doesn't mean shit. I'm too lazy to make a new account anyways. I figured that this was an "Eminem" forum so I made an Eminem relating name. That was 7 months ago anyways.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Relapse.LP » Aug 31st, '09, 03:02

Coleon wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:He could have shit in his signature and it doesn't mean shit. I could have DMC in my signature and bump De La Soul. Doesn't mean shit. I'm too lazy to make a new account anyways. I figured that this was an "Eminem" forum so I made an Eminem relating name. That was 7 months ago anyways.


I had this sig custom made by Slimm because Fast Life is my favorite song ATM

after you battle J Roc we'll have a 20 bar battle just so I can flame you without getting booted off the site

I seriously think that you are the dumbest most profoundly stupid person to ever touch a keyboard


Lmao. Getting pissed already? How sad. How old are you, 10?

Fucking loser, seriously.

I bet you're already starting to write your battle verse against me. Can't control that anger, huh? Lmao. I can predict half of the disses made against me. Some random shit with Slim biting here and there and the occasional use of "fucker, faggot, bitch" That's all the imagination you got.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 31st, '09, 03:03

da.relapse.lp wrote:
Coleon wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:He could have shit in his signature and it doesn't mean shit. I could have DMC in my signature and bump De La Soul. Doesn't mean shit. I'm too lazy to make a new account anyways. I figured that this was an "Eminem" forum so I made an Eminem relating name. That was 7 months ago anyways.


I had this sig custom made by Slimm because Fast Life is my favorite song ATM

after you battle J Roc we'll have a 20 bar battle just so I can flame you without getting booted off the site

I seriously think that you are the dumbest most profoundly stupid person to ever touch a keyboard


Lmao. Getting pissed already? How sad. How old are you, 10?

Fucking loser, seriously.

I bet you're already starting to write your battle verse against me. Can't control that anger, huh? Lmao. I can predict half of the disses made against me. Some random shit with Slim biting here and there and the occasional use of "fucker, faggot, bitch" That's all the imagination you got.


Have you ever read any of the stuff hes ever posted. Because with that statement i seriously doubt you have.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby 7th Disciple » Aug 31st, '09, 03:10

Dope. :y:
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 31st, '09, 03:14

7th Disciple wrote:Dope. :y:


How much do yo want to bet this is da.relapse.lp
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby 7th Disciple » Aug 31st, '09, 03:17

classthe_king wrote:
7th Disciple wrote:Dope. :y:


How much do yo want to bet this is da.relapse.lp


? lol im just new.. i was looking for an eminem fan site lol... :confusion:
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Relapse.LP » Aug 31st, '09, 03:19

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
7th Disciple wrote:Dope. :y:


How much do yo want to bet this is da.relapse.lp


can't be him, whoever posted that managed not to sound like a fucking idiot


Best thing you can come up with? Lol... fucking loser.

classthe_king wrote:
7th Disciple wrote:Dope. :y:


How much do yo want to bet this is da.relapse.lp


I can't tell if you're extremely retarded or you really think that. I wouldn't waste my time making another account. I'd have to make another email address, fucktard.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 31st, '09, 03:22

I just think its fishy that you signed out right before he signed in, then he signed off right before you signed back in.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby Relapse.LP » Aug 31st, '09, 03:25

classthe_king wrote:I just think its fishy that you signed out right before he signed in, then he signed off right before you signed back in.


So you are a fucking retard then?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: What Goes Around - Nas (My Remix)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 31st, '09, 03:26

If you say so...
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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