Noeezy - Pacin'

[Noeezy]

Verse 1
I'm just pacin myself as i chase for the top place
If you cant handle the kings why try to come face the ace
Its a disgrace that real rap has been misplaced
To cut to the chase i realized lyrics are not embraced
Not gonna mention a name to give their image a frame
Usin the formula to make a hit is how they milkin the game
Need some rubbers for these jocks fuckin hiphop in the ass
Their bubblegum raps are the good for nothin racoons in the trash

Chorus
Must of cheated the mic test cuz ur style is elementary
When it comes to wack beats ya vocals are complimentary
I know ya still a shook cause we led from the beginning
Ggot ya whole clique lookin like fuckin bobbleheads spinning
Let us teach the clown thinkin they can write a better rhyme
The hottest from long beach, to the valley, n right back to anaheim

Verse 2
I'ma call em 7 days cause these bitches is weak
The truth is crime pays cause we always killin a beat
Get caught up in a mess nah i leave ya ass stranded
If i had to fight you lyrically i could do it singlehanded
We take you out the game and replace you like a battery
One bar out yo mouth is already wastin raps capacity
You cant compete with the elite man sit back in ya seat
We bring the heat to the street you can check the receipt
So tell me whose flow comes harder than cali4's can
Either you know nothin or u know that we're the best clan

Chorus
Must of cheated the mic test cuz ur style is elementary
When it comes to wack beats ya vocals are complimentary
I know ya still a shook cause we led from the beginning
Ggot ya whole clique lookin like fuckin bobbleheads spinning
Let us teach the clown thinkin they can write a better rhyme
The hottest from long beach, to the valley, n right back to anaheim

Verse 3
See our music spreads around so here is lesson 1
Try to beef wit us we'll finish you like testin is done
Dont be mistaken C4 stayin on top of this game
Known for takin it to new levels you keep it the same
see our lyrics cause tantrum fake rappers i cant stand em
If theyre rough around the edges ima take their paper n sand em
We bust shots at random with these verbal attacks we hand em
Its like we got a hostage always gettin what we demandin

also a recorded version in audio stage. will return feed

[mcZu]

Liked it. Chorus is too long though. Flowed nice, structure looks strange, but that doesn't matter anyway. The 7 days/weak punch is played out, but hey, it's still dope. Nice drop.

[Noeezy]

Liked it. Chorus is too long though. Flowed nice, structure looks strange, but that doesn't matter anyway. The 7 days/weak punch is played out, but hey, it's still dope. Nice drop.

Thanks for feed, means a lot from a dope mc.
Who used the 7 days/week line before though?
I tried to do a different structure with longer verses if you want to check it out
Some of it was written to BoB - Generation Lost

Pacin'

I'mma just begin the story by simply rhyming in my rap
Avoiding the glorious assembly line leading to a trap
Cause most rappers are made, with no lyrics to back them
Their success starts to fade, impossible to see like a atom
You wonder where they went, cause they wear out like clothes
Their career was left for dead and its startin to decompose
Fighting piece for piece, they try to solve the puzzle
Keep igniting the beef, but the conflict is the struggle
I just keep pacin myself as i chase for the top place
If you cant handle the kings why try to come face the ace
It's a disgrace that real rap has been misplaced
To cut to the chase i realized lyrics are not embraced
Not gonna mention a name to give their image a frame
Usin the formula to make a hit is how they milkin the game
Need some rubbers for these jocks fuckin hiphop in the ass
Their bubblegum raps are the good for nothin racoons in the trash

Must of cheated the mic test cuz ur style is elementary
When it comes to wack beats ya vocals are complimentary
I know ya still a shook cause we led from the beginning
Got ya whole clique lookin like fuckin bobbleheads spinning

let us teach the clown thinkin they can write a better rhyme
the hottest from long beach, to the valley, n right back to anaheim
i'ma call em 7 days cause these bitches is weak
the truth is crime pays cause we always killin a beat
Get caught up in a mess nah i leave ya ass stranded
If i had to fight you lyrically i could do it singlehanded
we take you out the game and replace you like a battery
one bar out yo mouth is already wastin raps capacity
so tell me whose flow comes harder than cali4's can
either you know nothin or u know that we're the best clan
See our music spreads around so here is lesson 1
Try to beef wit us we'll finish you like testin is done
Dont be mistaken C4 stayin on top of this game
Known for takin it to new levels you keep it the same
see our lyrics cause tantrum fake rappers i cant stand em
If theyre rough around the edges ima take their paper n sand em
We bust shots at random with these verbal attacks we hand em
Its like we got a hostage always gettin what we demandin

Must of cheated the mic test cuz ur style is elementary
When it comes to wack beats ya vocals are complimentary
I know ya still a shook cause we led from the beginning
Got ya whole clique lookin like fuckin bobbleheads spinning

[mcZu]

^That's waaaay better. Structure looks great, two verses and a short chorus looks better on paper and will sound good recorded. Your underrated on Tr, you should post more often.

And 'bout that week/weak line, well I used it a couple of times.. and I'm sure some other rapper has, lol. But it aint a big deal, it's dope and it fits your context.

[Noeezy]

^That's waaaay better. Structure looks great, two verses and a short chorus looks better on paper and will sound good recorded. Your underrated on Tr, you should post more often.

And 'bout that week/weak line, well I used it a couple of times.. and I'm sure some other rapper has, lol. But it aint a big deal, it's dope and it fits your context.

Thanks bro
yeah it didnt really sound like i had a chorus when i first recorded it, I was like damn that should be shorter.. haha i'll try recording the new version soon and add it to the post I have in audio stage.