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Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 31st, '09, 11:53

ps:this was deleted by mcmaybe when scott posted it,i think its cuz i said "mc" and he thought it was about him ,so edited it now,i guess there is no problem posting this by now :y: :unsure:

so this is directed mainly to james,err in my verse it was directed to big axe too,
mentionned more people like solace,coleon,AliJACK,emzee...and Mczu
check it out,and dont tell me this aint crazy cuz its like u told the sky aint blue :p

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See, at first I thought JR was a michael Jackson fan, riding Axe
On second thought, nah fuck it he's just riding jack's
Talking spiteful trash about le tuna he knows naught about
Don't even act like the mods are not about to knot a bout
shout!What the fuk? ur Like 5?james is a stranger to Harlem clout
my tag team is a circus act, so its routine when I toss you, clown
You should look to us like sources of light, get stonned by suns
We're about the bring down JR's best and worst crew one by one
It amuses me that the most basic member runs your bitch ass for fun
I'll have BiG's ass checked, with that giftwrapped rep
I'm surprised nobody stomped out your bitch ass yet
After we befather you and big, better get,that check, I whiplash vets
On the Broward County music scene, AxE is a thin ass spec
But he does look really obscene in his trimmed black dress
We aint from the same area, damn ,you was born in the streets
He's a warlock in a white tee, you could play Tetris with his teeth
There's no mixtapes or berettas in this beef
These pussies got their groove back? Only ur mother when she queefed
Descent into the tunnels and you'll find the most hellish of the beasts
I can see your hesitation, your daggers fell into their sheathes
Epi is dead, and you can't contend if you're deceased
Mr.ImDiseased Hey,Still haven't heard any from u prick
Prolly jamming some Kanye, burning henny and bricks
Slurping the gel from his dick, you still haven't learned to belly his jizz?!
Get murdered, buddy - this twirp is gully with off dome rapping
I'll put your arms through your head, turn your skully to crossbone thatches
JR the self proclaimed top crew? This is doggone madness
J for Jackson you'll get sent up in some boxcar caskets
Or you could remain silent, play dead, use those lockjaw tactics
Fuck your grungy collabos, I'll let the poison seep under your marrow
We're the rap diablos and we've come to put you bums on the gallows
Emzee and Ali are dead - these zombies walk in the sunniest shadows
sac Can can't, simple fact, and you can blame the cash surge
Go head, blame my last verse i came to enflame your wack turf
When sac got banned, all thought it was great
I'm about to finish james, dump him off the mountain interstate
i was gonna stop for fuks sake, I was out to infiltrate
scott ripped jr like yesterday, thats why i thrashed at you
They watched your pac pic then everybody laughed at you
Keep in mind, Cheap sheep McZU, the wolves will bite you if i asked them to
No verses yet? I might just pass 1/2 the noose to wrap 'round you bastards too
Like a German fact, fuck respect,we'll burn the set, of him and you
Tell your men they work for us now...this site deserves a better class of crew.
Now don't get me wrong, fellas, there's no bad blood between us
But I'll slit ali & coles throat - now there's mad blood between us
big axe cleans out the chickencoop and james loves to play with the cocks
Since you dissed me and i came to a stop -
Now you aimless naysayers claim your the top?
my shots get u dropped?,imma murder you then ,now you can call the cops
Over the cursed plains we're invading your crops
Catch us flying over these dying soldiers of jr like big James in the spot
Sorry b, it's over - you'll shoot blanks 'til the only thing left is your holster
solace can't hold, he still carries the dead weight of his homies on his shoulders
Who's left to diss? Who left in your crew james exists?
imma fuck you up on your deathbed, im the new exorcist

Scottie Boi One Da

listen listen .. baby boy do you here that sound, it's nothing.
the sound of when you come into a room; 2000 crickets rubbing
in real life you're nothing but a tub of lard in a chicken bucket
just grubbing out stuffing himself till he needs to buy a new bra
what you looking at me for? oh right, ann summers is too far .. ?
here's a key boy, and a brand new car; now drive it into traffic
save us all the despair of seeing your ugly face; 'cause we've had it ..
lie-aholic internet bragging addict; had sex? but you're a faggot .. ?
you don't get pussy, so why lie to us? i have the hook, you're the maggot
i'll throw you in the deep end; watch how my rhymes will bite you
i don't like you; i know i could put you on the floor if i could fight you
maybe i will take a holiday to shit-ville and right there i will find you
and call out your name, and be like "James, look who is beside you"
a white boy and a couple gothic girls who really need plastic surgery
no i won't sugar coat my verse this time; 'cause i've got the urge to be
the asshole you're gonna hate on for the rest of your internet life
best chance you got of being in a relationship is an internet wife
why don't you take my little red knife; and stab yourself in the belly and
see if you go whizzing round the room; you're as fat as an elephant
you look like a dog to me; and not a pretty one, so heel boy
stop making up lies about getting with girls; come on, be still boy
sit; give me your paw .. that's a good little dog; now whine to your friends
about how scotty hurt your feelings; wait shit, remind me again
how did i hurt your feelings? i was only saying what i saw with my eyes
when i flicked through your photo album, shit; i was surely surprised
a rapper .. ? really .. ? first of all to be a rapper you must have an image
and by image i don't mean the image of a retarded village idiot spillage
tell me baby boy; 'cause i'm your number one fan, i'm your own stan ..
when are you going to release something fam .. ? i don't understand ..
you claim to perform on stages, concerts; i ain't even seen a single picture
or a single video tape on your facebook page, where you have a mic with ya
i've never witnessed James R dropping in the audio section of TR
he claims it's 'cause he's poor; but i've got the truth right here ..
you don't rap .. you don't chat to girls, you don't do none of that
you've never had a girlfriend, don't lie, so just stop running that
oversized mouth that has bullshit flowing out; you're a fucking cat
an ugly bat; what the fuck is that, on your neck; it's your head
only it doesn't look like a head, it looks like the product of incest sex
your teeth are disgusting, your head shape is stupidly stupid
you need to start brushing .. couldn't get a girl if you was hit by cupid
look at me, the abercrombie wearing faggot that i appear to be
taking you out easily; you don't have shit on me; you're queer to me
i find it funny, how you hide your online status to fake that you've got a life
when really all your doing is cussing to me to Tru; i can spot a fly -
- guy a mile away, and you're not one of them, and that ridiculous face you pull
when you get a picture taken, it does nothing for your frame at all ..
you know you're chubby .. you start running, before you know it, your puffing
huffing and choking on the air; "quick! get this fucker a drink or something!"
i spoke to you friend on facebook chat, and he told me a lot about you dude
about how you don't go out much at night; especially without your two
favourite lesbian goth girls and that retarded looking white boy friend
did it ever cross your mind that when people say they like you, it's pretend?
you only have internet friends. James that's pretty fucking sad
you've deleted me off facebook now, i had you worried .. shit i'm fucking glad
that i managed to hit you with something, now now, i know a lot about you
more than rolling on the floor with fat dudes; more than red shoes
i know how you're a virgin, that's right .. a friend of yours told me
but hell i wasn't surprised at all see; i mean, who would fuck skin folding .. !!?
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Almostlity » Aug 31st, '09, 14:40

All i can say is WOW............... daaaaammmmnnnnnnnn DOTS FIRED!
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Slimm » Aug 31st, '09, 16:13

Didnt see that coming from scotty, didnt knew scotty and james had any troubles.
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby SajN » Aug 31st, '09, 16:24

Slimm wrote:Didnt see that coming from scotty, didnt knew scotty and james had any troubles.

Well, scotty always has to defend someone.


Le Tunisien: Did Scotty write some of the lines for you? I am sure he did some of those multies.
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 31st, '09, 16:30

haha good stuff Scotty :smoking:
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 31st, '09, 17:03

man ,, why you dont all have peace with each other...
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby D'Leh » Aug 31st, '09, 17:23

AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :y:
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby SajN » Aug 31st, '09, 18:20

Why would you get banned?
And I think you did help him a little.
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 31st, '09, 18:32

Ha. That was fun to read. Kinda humorous.
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 31st, '09, 19:15

Slimm wrote:Didnt see that coming from scotty, didnt knew scotty and james had any troubles.



exactly what i thought :unsure:
daym, well reviews:

Le's verse was well written, dont know how you managed your flow and structure this well, but if you wrote that shit, that was good :y:
scotty's verse was laden with personals, inside stuff, sick flow, good structure, loadsa punches,sick shit scott, never knew you could write like that,lo :y:
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby mcZu » Aug 31st, '09, 19:22

It's Zu not ZU.
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby SajN » Aug 31st, '09, 19:23

mcZu wrote:It's Zu not ZU.

I say the same when people say: saJn instead of SajN :zipped:

Some people are just .. aaaaarrrrghh
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby mcZu » Aug 31st, '09, 19:27

SajN wrote:
mcZu wrote:It's Zu not ZU.

I say the same when people say: saJn instead of SajN :zipped:

Some people are just .. aaaaarrrrghh


Yeah, and I got murked he called me a cheap sheep. :unsure:
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 31st, '09, 20:25

Lol no Fa-Q shot lol but yea that was crazy long...that would have been like 7-8 minutes on record
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Re: Le Tuna & Scotty - 110 LINES DISS (james & more)

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 31st, '09, 21:39

somebody got murdered,
and yes awesome verse scotty :y: ^^ and no SajN ,scott didnt help me in a single word,thats how it goes when u get shit outta ur chest,
110 lines diss who the fuk ever did this?
glad that i done this with scotty,its pretty dope :smoking:

and now all these people dissed go do a group verse diss,LOL doubt it would be better then this :flower:
i wanted to do this ,just cuz i found out many people dissed me while i was away back at the time,this is like the revenge,
and for james,hes over,
being a "champion of text"he should at least respond as soon as he reads this ,
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