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Fuck You Bitches

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 1st, '09, 03:39

watch it as a rip rips, clippin with this sick track
see me when I diss back, drippin from the retract
sippin with the relapse, slittin with my mean cap
see that I am not fucking around, because I mean that
stupid snake, don't expect you to go all out
Now respond, rip you all out with my tall shouts
all doubt gettin into this victimless bullshit
when I'm quick with this bullet, all get to sick to do shit
tunafish is a nuisance, what the fuck you cryin about
better stop wild'n out before I get my style and route
sittin' there with scotty tryin' lie and said you got me
but I got the peace like I'm ghandi that can make a bunch of bodies
when I go and punch the shotty knock you out of aracrombie
I'm already robbin' zombies, why the fuck you rocking honkies?
It's apparent, both need to learn a verbal lesson
so this burn of herbal essance will then turn you to the freshness
I really got the mac so I can really pop ya pack
Tuna not his cock you fag
why the fuck you rockin' rags?
when you see the glock in hand might wanna block ya man,
no this aint a shopping land no V Necks that cost a grand
and you aren't flossin' man.. stop the bullshit glossin' man
see me the with cool whip, rims color as ice cream
across this fuckin beef, same speed as light beams
what is it you might mean? I can see you like visine
and you aint hiding from me, why you rhyming with these
letters and sleeze, when you know that I am better then thee
if you don't get on your knees then I will sever your knees
diss a general, I let it slide, diss 2, I'll let you die
first rule of being dope, don't get high off ya supply
felt yaself to much, now you busted like public
ejaculation buses, gettin' fucked but you seem to love it
Yes I'm schizophrenic, yes I need to take some pills
YES I'm crazy, STILL better at making skills
then you ever will, writing with a letter quill, gettin ill
while you both fuckin' each other watchin' liquids spill
rippin your will, never asleep, resisting arrest
take off ya threads and chest, then stab you to death
grabbin ya neck, twist it till it's adam apple sauce
I battle hard, I battle miles, you couldn't battle yards
why the fuck you think I saddle for? go on top of battle horse
knock you with my rattle source, rhyme book is that of course
back and forth, punch your chest to the back of ya back
bomb ya vila in spain, cause.. ''Yeah baby I like it like that''
Like ''Black-Out All Stars'', cause that's what I do
all up inside your mouth like I'm fucking ya tooth...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 1st, '09, 04:47

uhm did i mention you on my diss lyrics???or are you revenging your gay partner james??
and uhm for this diss ,it wasnt fun to read,was more like a poem,and nothing hard,too much complex makes it lame,and usin eminems 8mile technique,dissin urself doest help,who cares if u are zichophrenic or idk wtf it is :y:

im not like u ,i leave a comment at least
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby gutawafang » Sep 1st, '09, 12:53

Nice nice. :)
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby theJFKshow » Sep 1st, '09, 14:14

"slittin with my mean cap"


idk what that means.
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 1st, '09, 14:59

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:wasn't that good, huuuuge lack of personals. you'll never be able to diss us properly mc anonymous, because you don't know us well enough. what made the james r diss so good, was all the inside information we had. this diss pales in comparison to ours. sorry. also the type of comments we've been getting on ours, compared to the comments, or should i say, lack of comments this diss is gaining, kind of tells you this anyway.

"i'll bomb ya villa in spain"

perfect example to show the lack of personals you got on me :laughing:


good catch :y: .. and i think ya you right , dissing is all about personals ..
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 1st, '09, 15:17

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:yep slim zaddy .. anyway

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i left a comment there ,, sick comeback ,, i'm enjoying this beef ,, lol .. for MC here it's was a good diss bro ,, but yeah , he's not from spain, you dont have personals , you have just dissed in general ,, there is actually no harsh dissing lines, like he does ,, but damn you got the vocab and complexity ..
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby Emadyville » Sep 1st, '09, 15:19

MC Anonymous wrote:stupid snake, don't expect you to go all out


with the beginning rhymes and that ^ I heard the warning in my head :n:

and yeah wtf does "mean cap" mean
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 1st, '09, 15:31

I keystyled this whole verse while listening to the warning :(
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby Emadyville » Sep 1st, '09, 19:21

MC Anonymous wrote:I keystyled this whole verse while listening to the warning :(


it happens, it actually seems like you keystyled this now that you said that, just try to not add shit that obviously sounds like its from an em song cause this an Em forum lol
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby D'Leh » Sep 1st, '09, 22:06

better than scotty's one......dope shit!!! :worship:
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Re: Fuck You Bitches

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 2nd, '09, 00:10

but anyways can i know why u wrote this diss?? :y:
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