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Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:00

Is it real love if you love a fake?
Is it true love if you love a lie?
Is it supposed to end if it didn’t even start?
Is it a potion to mend a broken heart?

Are you even listening?

Will you answer my questions?
Will you make this worthwile for me?
Will you be kind, sweet little girl?
Will you not disappear from my world?

Why does it always have to rhyme?

Why do you always die on me?
Why do you always have to hurt me?
Why can't you just smile at me?
Why can't you not lie to me?

Must you always blame another?

Must you always assume things?
Must you always accuse me of everything?
Must you hate me for my doings?
Must you go the opposite way I'm going?

Do you realize you're obsessed?

Do you want it to be this way?
Do you think you're that beautiful?
Do you intend to leave me like this?
Do you wish for us to hold our hands?

You're obsessed, Fish. :(
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby D'Leh » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:32

REALLY GOOD STUFF GUTA!!! :y:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:33

zurditoshady wrote:REALLY GOOD STUFF GUTA!!! :y:

Thanks for checking my stuff out always man. I appreciate it. :flower:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby D'Leh » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:36

gutawafang wrote:
zurditoshady wrote:REALLY GOOD STUFF GUTA!!! :y:

Thanks for checking my stuff out always man. I appreciate it. :flower:



IT JUST CUZ YOU'RE AWESOME AT THIS MAN!!!
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:40

LOL. Thanks for capitalizing. :sweating: Thanks for the encouragement homie. :worship:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:44

dope poem man,, nuf said ,, boring is usefull sometime i see
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:46

Slim Zaddy wrote:dope poem man,, nuf said ,, boring is usefull sometime i see

haha. thanks man for always giving me feed. I totally appreciate the encouragement. :worship:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:52

gutawafang wrote:
Slim Zaddy wrote:dope poem man,, nuf said ,, boring is usefull sometime i see

haha. thanks man for always giving me feed. I totally appreciate the encouragement. :worship:


anytime man ,, :y:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby *MIRANDA* » Sep 2nd, '09, 17:58

this was beautiful !!!
reminds me allot of a person i know
good job :flower:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 3rd, '09, 02:42

*MIRANDA* wrote:this was beautiful !!!
reminds me allot of a person i know
good job :flower:

Wow thank you Mirnada. :worship: :happy:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 7th, '09, 08:36

i loved the way you signed it at the end.. it's so touching :happy: , good job :flower:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Sep 7th, '09, 08:43

nice :smoking:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 7th, '09, 11:49

emzee-frenzy wrote:i loved the way you signed it at the end.. it's so touching :happy: , good job :flower:

Yeah man. I totally appreciate it bro. Thanks. :happy:

macdaddy019967 wrote:nice :smoking:
good job

Arigato. :worship:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '09, 14:32

that was dope :worship:
really touching stuff
my favorite part was
gutawafang wrote:Is it real love if you love a fake?
Is it true love if you love a lie?
Is it supposed to end if it didn’t even start?
Is it a potion to mend a broken heart
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby BILI » Sep 7th, '09, 15:24

I love it bro :worship:
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