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I Could Never Love You

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Re: I Could Never Love You

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 3rd, '09, 01:26

thats just fucking awesome, i love it :flower:
great flow too :y:
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Re: I Could Never Love You

Postby gutawafang » Sep 3rd, '09, 03:00

you get naked, say you won't fuck me, that's just another lie
I didn't like that line at all.

But overall, it was awesome man. The flow's good, the multis too. Love stuff always touches me. :worship:
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Re: I Could Never Love You

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 3rd, '09, 10:30

well not your best in love pieces , but still it's a great drop from ya bro ,, it flowed very well , multies were good, you got the emotions , but not deep this time ,,, both ways ,, sick drop . keep them coming , i like your love pieces ,, i wanna see more scotty :y:
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