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Postby mcZu » Sep 3rd, '09, 19:13

If ya’ll can’t deliver on that mic, rappers
Stop addressing Hip Hop, ‘cause you miss the whole package
Don’t want to, but ya’ll forcing me to attack it
Bunch of actors, I’ll drop ‘em in an endless pit
Aint talking Brad, but I’ll do you like I was an inglorious bastard
Endless spit, end ya’ll with heat
Send ya’ll back home -like measuring; on your feet
If your lucky that is, ya’ll can’t tap this
Can’t rap like this, so fuck your list
Go against me, and I’ll make your mood depress like journalists
Your end is behind that mist, a hindsight wish
How your mind thinks and reminisces how life is
It’s actually quite modest, what I say, I’m just honest
Try standing up against me and I’ll make you fall like passing august
Fault is a definition ya’ll wear proudly like a fitted
Ya’ll couldn’t spit it, if your lyrics were nausea inflicted
It’s vicious, and a false realistic figment
People started to diss in general, so in a general segment
They generally referred to as pigs in cement
Mentioned in general as strange figures that are weakened
Next time don’t mention a General, ya’ll expendable
Expect a general onslaught if ya diss again in general
Ya’ll know it’ll be game over, race is over
This is a ride you can’t comprehend, 'cause we general motors
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 3rd, '09, 19:20

$(@TTY B@Y wrote::o you jacked my brad pit name play


I wrote this before you showed me your verse. :sweating:

Wrote this in class today, lol.
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 3rd, '09, 19:22

^Thanks Scott, yeah it is a coincidence, great minds think alike. :b:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Spyder » Sep 3rd, '09, 21:29

fuckin generals son, they all aint ready :shifty:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 3rd, '09, 22:08

wats with the general shit :n:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 3rd, '09, 22:11

le tunisien wrote:wats with the general shit :n:


If you didn't know, that word has more than one meaning. And it seems you even fail to comprehend the sublime there, lol...
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Spyder » Sep 4th, '09, 01:13

le tunisien wrote:wats with the general shit :n:

yea dumbass he only capatalized one "Genereal" so he only mention us once
the rest was either wordplay at the end, or just fit with the rhyme :y:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 4th, '09, 21:26

^Exactly.
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Noeezy » Sep 5th, '09, 02:37

If ya’ll can’t deliver on that mic, rappers
Stop addressing Hip Hop, ‘cause you miss the whole package


Send ya’ll back home -like measuring; on your feet


Fault is a definition ya’ll wear proudly like a fitted
Ya’ll couldn’t spit it, if your lyrics were nausea inflicted


haha nice shit :b:
does le tunisien have beef or somethin? lol
dudes jus hatin, keep it up :y:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 5th, '09, 22:59

Thanks Noeezy, appreciate it :b:

And, yeah, dude is need of attention.
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Spyder » Sep 5th, '09, 23:05

hey noeezy u wouldnt be a guy named nitruzz somwhere else would you :shifty:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 6th, '09, 11:36

dope shit bro ,, i liked it ,, keep it up :y:
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 8th, '09, 20:29

Thanks Zaddy, appreciate it.
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Re: Hiatus

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 8th, '09, 21:06

Try standing up against me and I’ll make you fall like passing august
Fault is a definition ya’ll wear proudly like a fitted
Ya’ll couldn’t spit it, if your lyrics were nausea inflicted


that was ma fav part homes, sick shit
nice use of wordplay and punches :y:
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Hiatus

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 00:56

Thank you sir. :b:
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