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My Ethics

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 4th, '09, 21:02

I'm lost in a place where reality is fake
humanity will take all the life I have to make ethics
I'm living for mistakes, rippin skin then slice my face
why my space, satan doesn't give a fuck about my taste
If I lived inside a world where the sorrow was gone
I'll be crusified by thorns, when tomorrow is dawn
Life a obstacle, to knock you out your progative
positively positive, breathe in oxygen, breathe out nitrogen
It's a fucking shame, life a picture you take
you take it, rip it up, spit on it, cause the scripture is fake
try to interpret something that is beyond your comprehention
then come to me and tell me that you don't got the tention
It's pathetic, drowning in anesthetics, synthetic brevage
man made morality when actually none follows the entrance
don't tell me how to live, or what I should believe
cause belief is different from breathin', atleast it has a scheme

God forgive me for my sins, here is things that I have done
thought about raping, killing people, and living by the gun
I'm a spirit, hear it, you can come and tell me that I'm finished
but with one wish I wish you could allow me just one last kiss
to each of my family members, tell them that I love them
tell them I'm above them, living inside a place of abundance
I'm worth nothing to many, to the people that offend me
all my enemies hate me, I wish rachel can save me
her challange was to love, was be kind to one another
rhymin' as a brother, and I'm crying as no other
If you see me in reflections, yeah I'm haunting you
I'll be taunting you too, miss a call and you're doomed
It's a story of my life, and it ends with this chapter
all these people that capture the hate and hope I really shatter
Before I'm dead and gone you will realize you were wrong
all of you sing along to this song until dawn..
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: My Ethics

Postby mcZu » Sep 4th, '09, 21:28

It seems two fifth of the Generals is dropping knowledge in CW this day.

Dope piece of poetry.
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Re: My Ethics

Postby mcZu » Sep 8th, '09, 20:30

Bump.
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Re: My Ethics

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 00:58

Bump b b bump bump b b b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
Bump b b bump bump b bump b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
(Just Blaze)
Bump b b bump bump it up
We gon do it like (Uuh, uuh, uuh)
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Re: My Ethics

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 11th, '09, 01:15

mcZu wrote:Bump b b bump bump b b b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
Bump b b bump bump b bump b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
(Just Blaze)
Bump b b bump bump it up
We gon do it like (Uuh, uuh, uuh)

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Re: My Ethics

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 11th, '09, 01:38

MC Anonymous wrote:I'm lost in a place where reality is fake
humanity will take all the life I have to make ethics
I'm living for mistakes, rippin skin then slice my face
why my space, satan doesn't give a fuck about my taste
If I lived inside a world where the sorrow was gone
I'll be crusified by thorns, when tomorrow is dawn
Life a obstacle, to knock you out your progative
positively positive, breathe in oxygen, breathe out nitrogen
It's a fucking shame, life a picture you take
you take it, rip it up, spit on it, cause the scripture is fake
try to interpret something that is beyond your comprehention
then come to me and tell me that you don't got the tention
It's pathetic, drowning in anesthetics, synthetic brevage
man made morality when actually none follows the entrance
don't tell me how to live, or what I should believe
cause belief is different from breathin', atleast it has a scheme

God forgive me for my sins, here is things that I have done
thought about raping, killing people, and living by the gun
I'm a spirit, hear it, you can come and tell me that I'm finished
but with one wish I wish you could allow me just one last kiss

to each of my family members, tell them that I love them
tell them I'm above them, living inside a place of abundance
I'm worth nothing to many, to the people that offend me
all my enemies hate me, I wish rachel can save me
her challange was to love, was be kind to one another
rhymin' as a brother, and I'm crying as no other
If you see me in reflections, yeah I'm haunting you
I'll be taunting you too, miss a call and you're doomed
It's a story of my life, and it ends with this chapter
all these people that capture the hate and hope I really shatter
Before I'm dead and gone you will realize you were wrong
all of you sing along to this song until dawn..


That bar is my favorite, but the whole verse is dope.

This whole thing is one the best you ever wrote. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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