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Postby Solace » Sep 5th, '09, 17:52

5 Star Generals up in this bitch!

[Spyder]
Did you miss me, now envision me missing, it sucks
These bitches go nuts when Generals aint tearin it up.
You starin at us, wonderin where did all the mics-go
Teach all y’all to spit with it, the 5 Star Mistro.
Shit gets messy when you test the, best its interesting
So rest because you best be, ready for lyrical ingesting.
Sorry we went missing in action, we have quit relaxin
To spit the raps n’, leave again in an instant fashion
It’s the passion, that has the Generals dismantlin tracks
An animal pack, a house fire that leaves the mantle intact.
So put those cameras back, no snapshots for your laptops
We said all your lyrics first, so all you speakin is backwash.
You act-soft, your rhymes just like cushion-against-me
I fly by emcees, while you’re left pushin-a-ten-speed.
Fuck a tournament im pissed, made me laugh whenever-he-spat
Im off my rocker, so CW open armed welcome-me-back.

[McZu]
On some Onyx shit, be prepared for your Last Dayz
One fifth of the bars of one fifth of the Stars goes past amaze
No fiasco, sleep on us and you end up like Terri Schiavo
Torture you, postpone your END, call us Lupe Fiasco
You tire us, so I refer to you as plain continental products
Drifting away ‘cause we reign, now picture our monumental conduct
Generals mental state of mind, is similar to an MRI
You’ll see past the bullshit in the game, just our miraculous side
Glorious minds are better than ‘em, aint talking Diesel
Your mirror will be acting like Santana, ‘cause you’ll see skull
They called out? Yeah, ‘cause they run their mouth, ock
No they’re part of the Fall Out Boys without the rock
Generals aint snobbish, though we stuck up
You bitches will always be under us, ‘cause we don’t fuck up
We a walking weapon group, word for word smashing
Generals are always strapped, like girl-on-girl action

[Solace]
Ill is an understatement, I'm underrated, my power, well the thunder makes it,
In full concentration, blast light on concepts at the top and you're under; face it,
Correcting everything wrong that's constant, I ain't great, I'm just being honest,
I'm rare, people study me like a comet, and I always get better like electronics,
So stop it, you're all aggravating with complaining daily so I get so frustrated,
Before I cock this, 12 gauge to spray the day with hate, bliss fading, you'll hate it,
With raw complexity, no enemies vexing me, try testing me, you're dead, you'll see,
Prove to me you're the best MC, best believe my jets can be the best weaponry,
Invest in vests to rest indeed, I can strike at night, fight whenever you're ready,
You'll be splattered after you're battered like glass shattered, just like confetti
Don't tempt me I'm deadly, instead be retreating this evening, don't meet me,
Rip your intestines, feed it to poor after I feed you raw meat and leopard feces,
Fuck a treaty, you weaklings can't defeat me, I'm a savage beast, a lyrical fiend,
No one can have me beat, I ravage beats, to Nas I'm a miracle, a dream,
An animal you can't tame, I rewire mainframes, to practice twisting brainwaves,
It's a general take over, this days over, we're taming today in insane ways.
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '09, 18:01

well i don’t miss ya at all :p , and you're 3 here ,, then why 5 lol... anyway brothers ,, it's a sick collab ,, i think all ya verses are fire ,,
spyder was dope ,, but flow could be better ,, but lyrics and rhymes and multies used are sick so keep it up bro :worship:

mczu : yours was dope too , i liked your multies and your first 4 lines there are great ,, like the way you end it ,, good job ,, keep them coming :worship:

solace : yours was too long man,, but still enjoyed it ,, you have some clever lines , flow was a little bit off due to the long lines ,, but i can see the creativity ,, with the electronics lines , I liked that one ,, lyrics and rhymes are dope ,.. keep the heat up ya too ,,

overall: nice collab guys ,, remember you're 3 ,,, now ,, not 5 lol ... anyway , hope to see more staff from ya cheers :b: :b: :worship:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Solace » Sep 5th, '09, 18:04

Thanks on feed man.

On 5 Star Generals..Its the group of me, McZu, Spyder, Anonymous and James. We were REPPING them.
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '09, 18:07

Solace wrote:Thanks on feed man.

On 5 Star Generals..Its the group of me, McZu, Spyder, Anonymous and James. We were REPPING them.


i know solace :whistle: , i'm just jokin around :flower: ,,,,,, ,,,
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Wic Kid » Sep 5th, '09, 18:10

guys...just... :worship:

By the way, Zaddy, Spyders flow was fuckin great! IMO, best flow here (no offense, Zu and Solace)
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Solace » Sep 5th, '09, 18:11

Glad you liked it Term! :flower:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby mcZu » Sep 5th, '09, 18:13

Thanks Term and Zaddy, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '09, 18:14

Termin8er wrote:guys...just... :worship:

By the way, Zaddy, Spyders flow was fuckin great! IMO, best flow here (no offense, Zu and Solace)



i didn’t say it's sucks :unsure: ,, i just said could be better ,, that's mean it's great but it can be better ,, .. ,, and that's my opinion , if you think it's fire ,, then that's you ,, not me ,, each one has a different opinion ,, if i'm right ??? .. peace man :y:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Solace » Sep 6th, '09, 23:51

Bump.
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Solace » Sep 6th, '09, 23:55

Why dont you tell me how you thought of it instead :whistle:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 02:33

i didnt even know you posted this :sweating:
Coleon did it take you a week to think of that one?

thanks Term and Zaddy :worship:
and thanks for the General feed Col, but me and you....were not done here :angry:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Solace » Sep 7th, '09, 02:38

Coleon wrote:made you laugh when I spit? ...like when I beat you you were like "hahah lol he beat my ass haha lol"

:laughing:

Coleon wrote:and nice collab guys, 3/5ths of the generals son

Thanks man
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '09, 04:07

Spyder, was this track you were talking about, cause its awesome. A great post among all this "beef."
Solace your flow was insane. Rhymes were great, everything was great.
It’s the passion, that has the Generals dismantlin tracks
An animal pack, a house fire that leaves the mantle intact.
Great line.
Zu your wordplay was on fire. Some great lines from you:
Torture you, postpone your END, call us Lupe Fiasco
Generals are always strapped, like girl-on-girl action
Your best verse in a while.
Spyder your were just tearing it up lyrically. The rhymes were dope as hell. Only thing i could say was make the lines shorter but you knew what you were doing.

Overall great piece.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 04:14

classthe_king wrote:Spyder, was this track you were talking about, cause its awesome. A great post among all this "beef."
Solace your flow was insane. Rhymes were great, everything was great.
It’s the passion, that has the Generals dismantlin tracks
An animal pack, a house fire that leaves the mantle intact.
Great line.

Zu your wordplay was on fire. Some great lines from you:
Torture you, postpone your END, call us Lupe Fiasco
Generals are always strapped, like girl-on-girl action
Your best verse in a while.
Spyder your were just tearing it up lyrically. The rhymes were dope as hell. Only thing i could say was make the lines shorter but you knew what you were doing.

Overall great piece.


you know that was me right :sweating:
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Re: Solace, Spyder & McZu - Did You Miss Us?

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '09, 04:45

Wow i feel like a douche now, switch spyder and solace in my review.
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