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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 14:06

bitchin and minutes does not rhyme
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 6th, '09, 14:11

dude that was one hardcore piece...nice ass lines in it
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nice read man..dont know whats goin on and dont wanna be involved in that e-beef thing...
but nice shit man :worship:
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 14:16

Coleon wrote:
le tunisien wrote:bitchin and minutes does not rhyme


this is basic rhyming man...not my fault your accent sounds like a vmpire

it doesnt rhyme, u fail :n: and honestly lame diss :n:
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 15:18

Coleon wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
Coleon wrote:
this is basic rhyming man...not my fault your accent sounds like a vmpire

it doesnt rhyme, u fail :n: and honestly lame diss :n:


i think everyone started disregaring what you say after we all ripped your asshole, it rhymed easily to someone who isn't a fucking retard, and you used to bite lloyd Banks and Eminem to diss people so fuck you :flower:

@C-Riz, thanks man :y:

thats only an illusion,no one ripped my asshole, and i just ripped annon's asshole ,james too :flower: and anytime soon big Axe D :flower: and u really suck,+spyders diss was much than yours,
and again,minutes and bitchin doesnt rhyme sry :n:
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby gutawafang » Sep 6th, '09, 15:22

It's dope man. I like all these beefs. :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:

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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby SajN » Sep 6th, '09, 15:24

le tunisien wrote:
Coleon wrote:
le tunisien wrote:bitchin and minutes does not rhyme


this is basic rhyming man...not my fault your accent sounds like a vmpire

it doesnt rhyme, u fail :n: and honestly lame diss :n:

It does.
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 15:32

SajN wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
Coleon wrote:
this is basic rhyming man...not my fault your accent sounds like a vmpire

it doesnt rhyme, u fail :n: and honestly lame diss :n:

It does.

damn can u record urself and say bitchin and Minutes, and let me hear that?ffs it doesnt rhyme :n:
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby SajN » Sep 6th, '09, 15:37

Tell me: Does it seem like Posterchild and Spokesman Now rhyme?
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby J Roc » Sep 6th, '09, 15:37

It does Rhyme ....
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 15:43

J roc wrote:It does Rhyme ....

well if it does,then its a very weak rhyme,sucks too bad :n:
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby SajN » Sep 6th, '09, 15:44

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:bitching and minutes does not rhyme. and if you're not going to record, and only use text, then you should make sure your verse rhymes without us having to guess what accents you're putting on the words ..

Well, that's another thing, audio and text. You're right about that. But it DOES rhyme. When I read the piece and read the bitchin line, I knew he'd have a word that would rhyme with it, and without ruining the flow or the reading, I managed to rhyme that word.
So yes, it does.

People said the same about my line where I rhymed "Without it" and "Coward", but it did rhyme :p

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J roc wrote:It does Rhyme ....

well if it does,then its a very weak rhyme,sucks too bad :n:

No hate bro, but you texts does mostly have very weak rhymes.

As I said, no hate.
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby J Roc » Sep 6th, '09, 15:45

le tunisien wrote:
J roc wrote:It does Rhyme ....

well if it does,then its a very weak rhyme,sucks too bad :n:


If It's a Weak Rhyme And It's too Complex For You To Know It Rhyme's.... Whut Does That Mean? :unsure:

@ Scotty - It's a SLANT Rhyme. Not Even a Complex One.
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby gutawafang » Sep 6th, '09, 15:46

It depends on how pro you are experimenting with words in the end. :y:
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 6th, '09, 15:49

lamfo ,, TR members are all now beefing with each other ,,, keep the heat down guys , it's not worth it .. if it does rhyme or not dont hate or beef with each other just cuz of a word and a silly discussion like that ..... nuf said ,, with respect to all
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Re: Along Came A Spyder

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 15:52

SajN wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:bitching and minutes does not rhyme. and if you're not going to record, and only use text, then you should make sure your verse rhymes without us having to guess what accents you're putting on the words ..

Well, that's another thing, audio and text. You're right about that. But it DOES rhyme. When I read the piece and read the bitchin line, I knew he'd have a word that would rhyme with it, and without ruining the flow or the reading, I managed to rhyme that word.
So yes, it does.

People said the same about my line where I rhymed "Without it" and "Coward", but it did rhyme :p

le tunisien wrote:
J roc wrote:It does Rhyme ....

well if it does,then its a very weak rhyme,sucks too bad :n:

No hate bro, but you texts does mostly have very weak rhymes.

As I said, no hate.

nope,i think i have better rhymes than this fag,and hey Without it and Co-ward i can see how it rhymes,bitchin and minute doesnt rhyme sorry,and my disses are so much better u just cant admit it,and u also say scott writes for me,no wonder why u locked my 110 line diss cuz people spamm my topic,
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