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I Dare You To Cross It

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 6th, '09, 15:50

systematically attack ravagely, battle me? blasphamy
blasting rapidy, actively detach your vertabrea, passively
stomache evacuation, blast and blazin, your ass is hating
rhymes is masterbation, beating heads at faster rates and
crash at stations, make em play my album, keep it rotation
It's like a rotary lyrical, gaining typical ovation
I keep bitches on they period, end it with a sentence
enter through they entrance, bend it, keep it for some seconds
weapons and I step in blastin, question my agression
I stomp on you for lessons, guessin, testin ya intestines
specimen of venom weaponry, detecting opposition
stop the bitchin', blocks are left in boxes, dropped in bits and
shoved in canisters, in cabinets like congress officials
so I drink it, live it, be it, sleep with nonsense materials
I end this with helios, stealing flows cause I'm neptune
Adept goon, blasting anybody that step too...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby gutawafang » Sep 6th, '09, 15:53

Flow's good. Multis as usual.

Awesomeness: stomache evacuation, blast and blazin, your ass is hating

Dope as usual homie. Full marks. :y:
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 6th, '09, 15:55

gutawafang wrote:Flow's good. Multis as usual.

Awesomeness: stomache evacuation, blast and blazin, your ass is hating

Dope as usual homie. Full marks. :y:

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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 15:58

rhymer.com ur familiar
your rap is so complicated u just put rhymes as much as u can thats about it,u make no sense :n:
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby gutawafang » Sep 6th, '09, 15:58

Fucking dope canibus style. :smoking:
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 6th, '09, 16:02

le tunisien wrote:rhymer.com ur familiar
your rap is so complicated u just put rhymes as much as u can thats about it,u make no sense :n:


In order for something to be complicated it has to have intelligence into it to be complicated, otherwise you would be able to figure it out. Think about that, then say I don't make sense.
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 16:03

MC Anonymous wrote:
le tunisien wrote:rhymer.com ur familiar
your rap is so complicated u just put rhymes as much as u can thats about it,u make no sense :n:


In order for something to be complicated it has to have intelligence into it to be complicated, otherwise you would be able to figure it out. Think about that, then say I don't make sense.

ok what are you talking about in your whole verse? :y:
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby gutawafang » Sep 6th, '09, 16:04

Dopeness.
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 6th, '09, 16:23

gutawafang wrote:Dopeness.

something you will never experience tuna... :(
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 16:55

emzee-frenzy wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Dopeness.

something you will never experience tuna... :(

haha look whos talkin :n:
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 6th, '09, 16:58

le tunisien wrote:
emzee-frenzy wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Dopeness.

something you will never experience tuna... :(

haha look whos talkin :n:

well i am talkin', must i remind you that i'm not beefin over stupid shit on the internet and i'm a far better writer than youre bicthmade ass. no hate :flower:
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Re: I Dare You To Cross It

Postby Solace » Sep 6th, '09, 19:35

He didn't just cross it his stupidity zig zagged it..

Oh you see what I did thar?

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