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Spyder + Scotty - The One

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Spyder + Scotty - The One

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 02:34

Scotty
standing in the coffee house, a girl with a spotted blouse
caught me out, looking at her, got me dropping towels
manager giving me shit, she's gone quick, lickety split
shit, give me a minute boss; before she's visionless, missed
ain't missing this chance, i'm outside, sun on the side of my skin
she's on the other side of the street, but our eyes wouldn't meet
sunrise fast approaching .. then my phone silently rings
it's on vibrate, i pick up .. look up, i've lost her again
can't talk to my friend, hung up, so i could spot her again
i look to my left, i saw her purse on the floor
i run towards it and pick it up, she cursed as she saw
me grab it, "i'm not a burglar of course!" listen to me
i saw you in the coffee house, theres not many fish in the sea
so i chased you 'cause you looked so, so different to me
she smiled as she fluttered her eyes as i took hold of her hand
she let go my hand and walked away, i was like "you don't understand"
i told her to come to mine, and eventually she succumbed to my
charm and my cucumber eyes, green she wondered why
i asked her over to my place .. "i could compare you to the sun
the clothes you're wearing, you stun, the way you're chewing your gum
has me truly succumbed, girl i think you're the one .. "
she just smiled and told me to go into my bedroom
"i need to get my head-loose" there's drinks in the next room
i hop in bed and i get naked, i'm sexually frustrated
sex-strated, it's gonna be x-rated, no need for explaining
i'm left waiting ... ten minutes pass, i'm dead patience
my excited breaths fading, i get up to go and find her
the apartment is empty, can't see her, a bottle of cider
is left on the side i look outside, and i try ta
see if i can see her on the street but she's gone
i thought she was the one, i'm stunned .. i listen to a song
as i drink alone, thinking of the rent i've got to pay
depressed and i keep thinking about the one who got away

Hook(X2)
Why must I, be cursed to be alone
Writin a verse for all the women I’ve known,
Why cant you lose your pride and come back to me
Cuz you were the one, you know I’d take you happily

Spyder
Havin trouble lately with relationships and commitment
What is it, bein ditched by every chick I’ve tried to get wit.
Strollin through the park, I’ve been alone from the start
You on your mobile phone not knowin you were controllin my heart.
Saw no one on your arm, as I try to get the courage to speak
She giggles, and musta thought I was deservin cause she,
Wrote down her number and said “you should give me a call”
And me with my legs shakin and being ready to fall.
I take it, I made it, I have her in the very palm of my hand
Cause understand, acting shy for her was my plan.
So we talk and I say, “hey come over to my crib”
Only thing is, the girl doesn’t know where I live.
So I hook her up with the map quest address, she’ll be here soon
What does she like, maybe I can try to rap her some tune…
Coming up the stairs, still tryin to fuck with her hair
“I hope he doesn’t care, because I really had nothin to wear.”
She steps in my door, my jaw drops, she keeps impressin me more
She wide eyed like, you have the whole second floor?
Well yes miss, “wow… I don’t know who you share this nest with
I’m impressed, I hope you don’t mind I stay till breakfast.”
Oh baby of course not, I figured that was the plan all along
Don’t get me wrong, I’m romanctic but damn take off that thong.
Things start to get heated, I am havin the most incredible night
I really hope I’m with this girl for the rest of my life.
We thrashin in the intense passion and action of sex
No relaxin, but I cant keep up cause guess what happens next.
I pass out, and when I wake up shes not beside me
Where’d she go, is wonderin around just tryin to find me?
Nope, so I grab my phone and call the number she gave to me
But the operator comes on… this call cannot be received.
From the moment this started I was alone in my apartment
I can believe I was stood up and just left broken hearted.
I was alone then, and alone today, no thanks to the one that got away.

Hook(X2)
Why must I, be cursed to be alone
Writin a verse for all the women I’ve known,
Why cant you lose your pride and come back to me
Cuz you were the one, you know I’d take you happily
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Re: Spyder + Scotty - The One

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 02:39

thanks man, i liked this collab :worship:
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Re: Spyder + Scotty - The One

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 02:41

its the name people call him at school
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Re: Spyder + Scotty - The One

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 02:44

yea i did actually, hope you like it
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