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Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 03:11

oh really 2nd place ko? u diss spyder and u mention me u faggot :n:

I spit shit,hit kids with it,put tha shoe wher it fits
so if you suck like ur homies just go and share a dick
hoe imma finish you,i spit it through,you know your gonna lay low
fag i dont pay hoes,gay-leO wat u play for?ur wack imma kill u K.O
coLeo,i am your past foe,and the fkn last tho, Where Does that Go?
no metapho,RAP SO,u Never will CLAP FOURS,ur jus packin YA ASSHOLE
cant get it?lemme "teach u a lesson",without "reachin for Weapons"
u'r "weak n depressin" im "eatin his flesh and" "beatin opressing"
this geek cause "he step in""keepin u guessin",u"need some agression"
before u start "speakn n testin",cuz i ripped u by "freein n messin"
CoLeona a pink faggot porn flick I got my clips set,Leona's mouth moving I just rip that
Im intellectual,u'r bisexual eatin from 2 sides casuals,Let my dick smash your ribs flat
Punches meant to kill,like "hold that dude"!!
Mess wit Spyder?he'll just flow past you
Mess wit me ? Dawg, I'd load and blast you
Whats real as that ? So No I ain't lieing prick
My plan is to smash all jus like bin laden did
ColeOFF,all you did,was made me fukin pissed off
Fat Dwarf, Now I gotta throw u up like refs tip off
fags i just dissed yall...got all ur heads ripped off
Spyder son'd u,hes done wit u,n now ur zipped off
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Requiem » Sep 7th, '09, 03:24

haha , that coleoff line was kinda neat..........
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 03:26

Coleon wrote:ColeOFF lmao :laughing: you win

ye ur name was ColeON it just turned off so yeah ColeOFF :happy:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 03:33

RIP Coleon
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 03:33

Coleon wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
cant get it?lemme "teach u a lesson",without "reachin for Weapons"
u'r "weak n depressin" im "eatin his flesh and" "beatin opressing"
this geek cause "he step in""keepin u guessin",u"need some agression"
before u start "speakn n testin",cuz i ripped u by "freein n messin"


crazy multies :worship:


I noticed that...sounds like he bit J Roc though

no i didnt, stop with ur excuses :n:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 03:36

Coleon wrote:
Spyder wrote:RIP Coleon

lmao, nail in the coffin mofucka

and Tuni, it's nice multis but it's nothin...you def bit someone anyway

:unsure: i bite ur mom then, but does she rap anyways? LOL
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Solace » Sep 7th, '09, 03:38

Why would you bite his mom.

Cannibals :crossed:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 03:47

Coleon wrote:*stops trying

you're dope man :worship:

I remember Maybe sayin yout the first person he's ever wanted actually murder after meeting them online...i hope he succeeds

looool maybe,maybe would success ,but not with empty gun :unsure: looooool
ok peace anyways u just got ripped off like i said,bb :y:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '09, 04:10

The lines scotty posted were good, but tbh the rest sucked.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 7th, '09, 04:44

That's good man. Multis especially. :)
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby mcZu » Sep 7th, '09, 04:51

Lol@ Le Tuna giving his victims girl names. Mc Anna, Oh Coleona.. who's next? Mc Zu-a?
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 7th, '09, 04:53

mcZu wrote:Lol@ Le Tuna giving his victims girl names. Mc Anna, Oh Coleona.. who's next? Mc Zu-a?

Zulaiha is a girl's name. :)

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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby mcZu » Sep 7th, '09, 04:53

gutawafang wrote:
mcZu wrote:Lol@ Le Tuna giving his victims girl names. Mc Anna, Oh Coleona.. who's next? Mc Zu-a?

Zulaiha is a girl's name. :)

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He should give you credit for that name, lol.
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 7th, '09, 04:55

HELL YEAH. :worship: :worship: :worship:

I'm so damn bored. I really love all these diss lyrics. :worship: :worship: :worship:

Keep it up ya'll! And keep the friendship cool too! :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Mr.P » Sep 7th, '09, 05:02

Lol, I`m with you Coleon :b: Just because you seem like a nice person haha lol. So here`s a few lines for my man Coleon :b: :

Le Tunisian you come and go as you please, like herpes decease.
I don’t consider him and you equal, Em was the first, he is the sequel.
This isn’t right, like when I fucked a girl in the ass, and made her ride home on her bike.
You`re Tina, He`s Ike. You basically told him to suck your dick, what to say? That’s gay!
Your quote go: "I'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward", that can’t be so,
if that was true, your father would have never ejaculated you.


All in good fun :y: I just wanted to write something hehe :p
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