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Die Painfull

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '09, 04:09

killing all these faggots who think they hardcore
i don't how but i'll stab you some cardboard
punch you in the face while i open up ya car door
i'm fucked in the cranium i'm up in here to start war
we could play red rover we could throw some darts or
we could play monoply we could play some cards or
i'll show you where the reaper lives you don't have the heart for
brutality & pain that you see you'll be scarred for
the rest of your life cause your death will be fatal
i'm sicker than a pedofile standing by a cradle
i'll come into your work shit on ya bosses table
i know your not jewish but for christmas heres a dradle
PK is in the house Derdy Ents the label
you don't like my shit you get it in the ass anal
talk shit about the crew best believe you die painfull
you always running lip talking shit just die painfull
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Re: Die Painfull

Postby gutawafang » Sep 7th, '09, 05:44

Dope flow man. :y:

It's short and simple to interpret. But I like it still man. :worship:
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Re: Die Painfull

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '09, 05:59

hell yeah glad you like
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Re: Die Painfull

Postby Xray » Sep 7th, '09, 06:02

Cool piece, seems like its gonna be a dope verse in audio. :8)
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Die Painfull

Postby lilrossy » Sep 7th, '09, 06:24

DerdyPK wrote:i'm sicker than a pedofile standing by a cradle

laughed at dat line. shit was good man, flow was great nd had sum cool lines in dare. keep it up bruz. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Die Painfull

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '09, 17:30

Good flow, good multi's, liked these lines:
i'll show you where the reaper lives you don't have the heart for
brutality & pain that you see you'll be scarred for
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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