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Escaping Pains Grasp

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Escaping Pains Grasp

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 7th, '09, 23:12

ghostly hands Hold Me too Closely the pain I'm feeling Goes Deep
sometimes I get No Sleep I can sense death riding in on a Cold Breeze

laughing cuz I'm Down N Out it's the avalanche and I'm the Mountain Town
thrown into this sea of regrets I knew that I would surely Drown in Doubts

my demeanor has been Pulverised and all is silent as this Soldier Dies
as Closure Slides Closer I say to myself that's Yo Hearse Ride

I can't Wake Up it seems a Fake Love is what my heart was Made Of
everything is Straight Fucked in my head I can see that my Graves Dug

it's that moment when the Truth Hits You like a Cruise Missle
disguised as something else just to create a New Ripple

into the Fabric of Time the Madness I Rhyme is Savage and Mine
it often Clashes with Minds leaving them Ravaged and Blind

to what they Thought they Saw apparently it was Not Alot
I'm no good cuz I ain't Got a Job so I should just Pop a Glock

knowing that the Shot will Drop me after the bullet Saws my Top
like the reaper behind me I Forgot to Watch tonight this has Gotta Stop
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Re: Escaping Pains Grasp

Postby mcZu » Sep 7th, '09, 23:18

Welcome back. Solid drop.
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Re: Escaping Pains Grasp

Postby Emadyville » Sep 7th, '09, 23:31

Solid shit, I enjoyed that.

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Re: Escaping Pains Grasp

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 8th, '09, 21:00

sick shit dude, flow was dope as usual, typical rain matrix shit
wellcome back :y:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Escaping Pains Grasp

Postby Solace » Sep 9th, '09, 01:45

Pretty damn nice, flow was easy to catch onto from the start and I was really feeling the multies and what you were saying :y:
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Re: Escaping Pains Grasp

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 10th, '09, 04:27

thanks for the feed I've been out in the unknown trying to keep my audio game up
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