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Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 00:05

never thought i'd ever be dissing axelanius du-hart
in the audio section you just try too hard
but still, it doesn't sound as good as two farts
you're not gonna go too far, a star, you aren't
all you are, is your mommas Big Accident
saw videos of your performance, and no one is looking at you spit
the stage was empty; kind of like your rhymes
you don't dickride james, you buttlick like you're right behind
his anus all the time; you're stuck with all the swine -
flu in mexico; wouldn't be surprised to know you're Bi -
sexual; the homophobic comments do not look good on you
and cussing gay people is something that you shouldn't do
because it makes you look hypocritic; 'cause you don't hit the bitches
you kiss the dicks; but remain hidden away from all the critics (shhh)
you're the fag, for dissing me in the first place, just "cause i was wack"
you're just as bad;u are crap,u cant rap i know, we could go play some tag
but nah cum bag, i wont,cuz u a Sac,so go away and dont ever come back
just drive away from me; back home where you're working minimum wage
axelanius .. jesus .. could you sound any more gay,in a maximum way?!
This thug is as Fake as drake, Imma Blow This Place
ill stabb this gay, n We know he wont Show his Face
i wouldnt wanna bury this faggot, but hes diggin his own graves
n im the gold in the mine ya know ya Diggin me,ur a born Slave
u and james?Better Stick Together.Guess these Dudes Real Tribal
Puttin on a Show ? I wouldnt Book Disciples in the Church Bible
you both Aint Smart Crooks...i will Leave ya Heart Shook
I wouldnt support AxeD If My Alter Ego was Garth Brooks
The Hit is Out... On trshadys Pitiful Ass Users
i cant deal with losers,ur crying for producers
Walkin with ur Nose Up Entertain Us with ya Flow Uhhh?
I Saw Ur LeTuna Diss Not Even Half ya Crew Showed Love
I Wanna Kill axe...But hes Sweeter then Apple Cider Damn
And his Biggest Challenge on the Web is Already Spider Man
i dont live in the sand,it aint mexic n,aint no Lifer Bands
wat was that mess u sent?guess yo mom needs breasts implants
i dont mean to offend..but i Will Get Ya Health Lifted
Axel Don’t Do Damage Unless the Shit is Self Inflicted
See How the Spits just Shifted...axe Aint as Bold as me
If Spoken Wordz Was a Man …He’d Strickly Be Fuckin-Poetry
Good Luck U Dyke… Projects Would Leave u on ur Back-Homes
With 2 Hands Made Outta Rims U Wouldnt Know How to Clap Chrome
That Aint How tuna Roams…You Kats Just Screaming Shoot me
feeling bad for james? Guess Now ur Just a fuckin Groupie
My keystyles Will Rip you...Waiting For Yours to Move Me
But ur Keys Don’t Work For me Like Victims in Saw Movies
ur just a fkn Brady and that’s Groovie…ya Bars Suck
heard ur diss,n thought u'r down with the Art, Duck
people sukin up:u'r Nice on the Mic…So u spit Hard? What !?
you could Spit Hot Coffee and I Wouldnt Pay ya a StarBuck
you cant afford bitches,cant go out, cant even get a slut
aint no Ghost Writer But Im The Ghost Fighter
Fake Net Thug So Ghost Clipz To Toast typers
And y'all be speakin Gun Talk But Ill Blam your fkn Heads
If We met in real Life,I Would spray you like a Can of Pledge
Big Axe i thought u was nice but found out i have astigmatism,
n i justlaugh dude sayin wigga like he got some nigger in him,
Axe-D? done murked that coward atleast twenty times
ur sufferin from depression,I think u need a back rub
Read a mystery novel, slit your wrists in the bathtub
Ma Mind Is Right,you kiddin me? ya Rhymes are Slice
With tha Signs Of Hype,Brings more crime than Night
Kez ghost Writes For Small Axe-D's Lines thats Right
you suck,ur skills are in small proportion n shit,
no matter how many times Axe perfoms metamorphosis...
his face still gon look like he got parkinsons disease
bitches disgrace to battle rap,now better believe
when Axel comes yall suckin somethin like a vacuum cleaner,
just thought he was rockin over the internet mackin teaners.
Heard you were gay back in the day, so taste the rainbow
Another Myspace,twiter junkie up everynight playing Halo
whats Big Axe - D without James?, nothin
quit fronting,ur tag team has droppd son...
so fuck Big-ass-D, and go fuk ur Double ass D,
i just hate you B,and if u want Trouble Ask Me
faggot your lookin like a drag-queen with a crooked eye yo
Axelinus reminds me of queer eye for the straight guy show..
u need some Attention So u be Usin Bolding Caps!
you spit no facts Im Loading Caps,Exploding Fags
if u breath hip hop,ur heart wont beat cuz i'v Frozen Raps
2 goons stepping to a gobblin wit such passion
I squash em both quicker then Gibson did Palin =)
grow..i Glow this case my Drop shows this brother is lame
shame,Iv Defeated u So now better go off for another name
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 00:13

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:lol, this was stronger than the big ax d diss towards you, more personals and great multies, shit, you improve very fast lmao .. :flower:

thx,
and he better stop saying that u ghost write me,
wat a faggot,i can say kez ghost write his lame line too
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 8th, '09, 00:22

scotty showed me like 1 week ago the first 10 lines, and said the rest was really trash, so I won't even bother to read this...

at least do audio... damn... youre pathethic
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 00:37

Big Ax-D wrote:scotty showed me like 1 week ago the first 10 lines, and said the rest was really trash, so I won't even bother to read this...

at least do audio... damn... youre pathethic

fag u better bother readin more than the first 10 lines=) read urself gettin destroyed :flower:
this is better than ur audio :)
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Spyder » Sep 8th, '09, 00:48

so much hate on TR lately :unsure:
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 01:29

Spyder wrote:so much hate on TR lately :unsure:

but mate , dont u think its great,
to not be fake,and spit some hate?

lol,it is what it is :flower:
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Spyder » Sep 8th, '09, 01:32

ehh, its alright at times.. but ppl be jumpin in on other cats beefs
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 01:57

Spyder wrote:ehh, its alright at times.. but ppl be jumpin in on other cats beefs

hmm ok, but u still didnt really feedback acutally xD :p
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 8th, '09, 01:58

I read it all now... didn't understood the punches, just rhymes thrown out

I won... sorry.. this is not even close to mine :y:

case closed
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 02:11

Big Ax-D wrote:I read it all now... didn't understood the punches, just rhymes thrown out

I won... sorry.. this is not even close to mine :y:

case closed

stop trying, and just re read ur lyrics and ull understand everything :flower:
u didnt even have multis and it really sucked compared to this, faggot u said u couldnt be bothered to read the read,guess u just did :n:
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 8th, '09, 02:18

le tunisien wrote:stop trying, and just re read ur lyrics and ull understand everything :flower:
u didnt even have multis and it really sucked compared to this, faggot u said u couldnt be bothered to read the read,guess u just did :n:


I read it, beacuse its the right thing to do since yo listened to mine :y:

I didn't put "multi's".. beacuse its not a battle, its a diss... an insult, what u did was put words together, throw punchlines and put my name between them, you only personal was the "Swine Flu" one, and I even replied to that even before you posted your verse.. the writing scheme may be better than mine on this 2 songs, but as a diss.. This is not even half compared to mine. you wanna hear me do multis and all that, listen to my albums, I can bet you a million dollars that you can not write as close as good as I do (even if you can't afford it)

and just so you know, in all the threads you always put "he didn't used multis"... you make yourself really look like an idiot, cuz multi's is the MOST BASIC thing on writing a rap, there's plenty more and more complex.. but you wouldn't know it, ignorant fuck
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 03:41

Big Ax-D wrote:
le tunisien wrote:stop trying, and just re read ur lyrics and ull understand everything :flower:
u didnt even have multis and it really sucked compared to this, faggot u said u couldnt be bothered to read the read,guess u just did :n:


I read it, beacuse its the right thing to do since yo listened to mine :y:

I didn't put "multi's".. beacuse its not a battle, its a diss... an insult, what u did was put words together, throw punchlines and put my name between them, you only personal was the "Swine Flu" one, and I even replied to that even before you posted your verse.. the writing scheme may be better than mine on this 2 songs, but as a diss.. This is not even half compared to mine. you wanna hear me do multis and all that, listen to my albums, I can bet you a million dollars that you can not write as close as good as I do (even if you can't afford it)

and just so you know, in all the threads you always put "he didn't used multis"... you make yourself really look like an idiot, cuz multi's is the MOST BASIC thing on writing a rap, there's plenty more and more complex.. but you wouldn't know it, ignorant fuck


Big Ax-D wrote:
le tunisien wrote:stop trying, and just re read ur lyrics and ull understand everything :flower:
u didnt even have multis and it really sucked compared to this, faggot u said u couldnt be bothered to read the read,guess u just did :n:


I read it, beacuse its the right thing to do since yo listened to mine :y:

I didn't put "multi's".. beacuse its not a battle, its a diss... an insult, what u did was put words together, throw punchlines and put my name between them, you only personal was the "Swine Flu" one, and I even replied to that even before you posted your verse.. the writing scheme may be better than mine on this 2 songs, but as a diss.. This is not even half compared to mine. you wanna hear me do multis and all that, listen to my albums, I can bet you a million dollars that you can not write as close as good as I do (even if you can't afford it)

and just so you know, in all the threads you always put "he didn't used multis"... you make yourself really look like an idiot, cuz multi's is the MOST BASIC thing on writing a rap, there's plenty more and more complex.. but you wouldn't know it, ignorant fuck

stfu i didnt see any complexity in ur diss, wack rhymes,lame structure i mean seriously its like u are insulting someone and writing it down hahahaha

and hey stop lying,that swine mexico wasnt the only personal, wat about this:
in the audio section you just try too hard

damn ur really just trying too hard,
all you are, is your mommas Big Accident
saw videos of your performance, and no one is looking at you spit
the stage was empty; kind of like your rhymes
you don't dickride james, you buttlick like you're right behind

Walkin with ur Nose Up Entertain Us with ya Flow Uhhh?
I Saw Ur LeTuna Diss Not Even Half ya Crew Showed Love

feeling bad for james? Guess Now ur Just a fuckin Groupie

wich is fallowed by 2 clever lines
My keystyles Will Rip you...Waiting For Yours to Move Me
But ur Keys Don’t Work For me Like Victims in Saw Movies

and its true that u got a poor job so stop runnin ur mouth
just drive away from me; back home where you're working minimum wage

and also
and cussing gay people is something that you shouldn't do
because it makes you look hypocritic; 'cause you don't hit the bitches
you kiss the dicks; but remain hidden away from all the critics (shhh)

damn its all facts,not like ur diss,ur diss was like nothing seriously its like "fuck you you suck i hate you" hahahahah really nothing lyricalad

and hey what did u say? :

and wat did u say "
Big Ax-D wrote: (even if you can't afford it)

hahahahaha looks whos talkin about money with ME,and btw ur jet ski line was a fail cuz that jet ski is mine hahahahahha

just admit it u got owned,and thats all , thats it
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 8th, '09, 05:15

dude, those are punchlines... not personals

in the audio section you just try too hard

... man, be honest with yourself, you can tell me what you want but.. do you think this is any kind of diss?

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damn ur really just trying too hard,
all you are, is your mommas Big Accident
saw videos of your performance, and no one is looking at you spit
the stage was empty; kind of like your rhymes
you don't dickride james, you buttlick like you're right behind


^^^^ this is good, but its not a personal, its a punchline... no one was looking at me?? thats fake, bcuz there we're around 3000 thousand people, you have to try harder and not be jelous

I'm not gonna break down the rest bcuz I know I'm wasting my time

the point is: my diss actually got u offended, you defend yourself of the jet ski, you defend yourself saying everything is fake, you defend yourself crying about the clamidia thing, thats what a diss should be aming for, and you don't have to lie about it, its clearly seen

your diss was a good response lyrically and well structured... but did it got to me???... no, thats my point...

there's no need to argue, mine got to you... yourse is even boring to read... so: no, I didn't got owned,

btw: that jet ski may be yourse... but I got 2... and better :y:
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 05:24

I just heard your verse, Big Ax-D. You win the beef. :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Fuck Big-Ass-D!

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 8th, '09, 05:25

again to support my point stated above

you reported my post to get it deleted... see dude, you got hurt by it

its the most bitch move to report a post just cuz you felt that you lost :n:
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