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Fa-Q - Yesterday (Prequel to Today and Tomorrow)

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Fa-Q - Yesterday (Prequel to Today and Tomorrow)

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 8th, '09, 05:56

Now I know when you read this it seems like a whole bunch of random stuff but this was a dream I had (so as the two preceeding this) and I just wrote what happened in the dream down. Enjoy and give me feedback


I lay in bed and the base is nails,
Scared to death and my face pails,
The air is thin and my taste stails,
If I died tonight I'd miss heaven cause my grace fails,
I was on the stairway to heaven but erased the rails,
I'm stuck in the shadow of death and trace the trails,
Trip in the blackness cause of my untied showlace tails,
I walk in the place of forgotton souls,
They look like fish caught in bowls,
I'm in a suit that's black with a white glove,
I see a shiny flute attack and fight a dove,
Even though its mother is right above,
I see a train of thoughts,
A murderers brain of plots,
His bloody Tshirt with red stain spots,
The rope he used to strangle his victims contains knots,


So yesterday, is no lest today,
Then it will be tomorrow,
Still filled with sorrow,
Every day we kill is borrowed,
So enjoy it cause soon it will be yesterday,


I see a soldier fighting a war,
He sees a lightning storm,
But it isn't frightening anymore,
The thunder warns of what is soon to come,
So loud It drowns out my tune to hum,
I see a forest of fires,
A carlot burns Taurus tires,
The fire inspectors are pourous liars,
The burning victims scream out like chorus choirs,
The people cry but their tears don't exist,
The fireman hope that they won't resist,
The building crumbles to its knees,
I ask the people if they want death and they mumble please
I look up and some of the people flies past,
Flappin wings look like an eye lash,
But some of the sum dies in a flash,
Then the rest tries to crash,


So yesterday, is no lest today,
Then it will be tomorrow,
Still filled with sorrow,
Every day we kill is borrowed,
So enjoy it cause soon it will be yesterday,


My attention diverts and I see a drummer on a drumset,
Writing a song about summer as if it hadn't come yet,
The lead singer is writing about the remaining three seasons,
He needs incentive what he doesn't see its raining reasons,
My finger nails get attacked by a hammer head shark,
Until they look like splinters from a tree which had red bark,
Wake me when this pain stops,
Now I got vein clots,
I sniff the scent of roots,
I see a tree with differnent fruits,
I feel my beating heart,
I'm in a race and leading at start,
But fall from first and finish last,
My strong spirit diminishes fast,
I try and stay head strong,
But found out I was just led along,

So yesterday, is no lest today,
Then it will be tomorrow,
Still filled with sorrow,
Every day we kill is borrowed,
So enjoy it cause soon it will be yesterday,
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Re: Fa-Q - Yesterday (Prequel to Today and Tomorrow)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 8th, '09, 14:59

Yo I think I might like that one better than the other two. I really felt the flow in this one. Alot of good lines
"My attention diverts and I see a drummer on a drumset,
Writing a song about summer as if it hadn't come yet,"
Had sick rythm in that one.
Also the finger nails hammer head shark line was dope man. Good job homie
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Re: Fa-Q - Yesterday (Prequel to Today and Tomorrow)

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 8th, '09, 20:06

Yah-hah wrote:Yo I think I might like that one better than the other two. I really felt the flow in this one. Alot of good lines
"My attention diverts and I see a drummer on a drumset,
Writing a song about summer as if it hadn't come yet,"
Had sick rythm in that one.
Also the finger nails hammer head shark line was dope man. Good job homie

Thanks jus yea I'm starting to like this one more and more...kinda darker than the other ones
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Re: Fa-Q - Yesterday (Prequel to Today and Tomorrow)

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 8th, '09, 20:38

Oh and if you could tell me which of Today, Tomorrow, or this one, you like best that would be great
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