An Animal

[Solace]

I kill it with ill hits when I spin discs, already tell my skill's infinite,
Yet still isn't finished, the entire crowd equals killed in an instant,
Ripping a midget named Bridget into/in two multiple witted digits,
Freshen your lyrics when I smear it with queer shit, you get it?
I was invented today so I'll spread the vengeance with haste,
Constant cocky characteristics, yeah you know the menace is great,
There'll be no mending her face after I'm done bending her face,
Sending her hate, she's a nobody 'cause she's just renting her fate,
Ending her waste of space, just be tasting ways to go tracing dates,
To find the day and place where she had just made great mistakes,
I'll go the Jason way and go tasting face after my tasteful raping phase,
You'll be amazed and dazed, like a gay in space after I lace his face,
Sit in the backseat, No? beat you quicker than athletes at a trackmeet,
As if you pack heat, actually you don't even know what that means,
Music, I need it, controversial like three hits to Lady Gaga's penis,
You know this piece was going to be sick so why did you even read it?

[D'Leh]

awesome like always Solace good flow structure multies and shiTTT!!! any feed??? : Random Shit is the title!!

[Solace]

Props on the feed, and I'll definitely return it

[classthe_king]

haha, Music, I need it, controversial like three hits to Lady Gaga's penis,
That was awesome.

[Solace]

Lmfao glad you liked it

[Solace]

great multis my boy, dope shit, your skill has flippin sky rocketed

and lmao you knwo Bridget The Midget is a height impared former prostitute/stripper right? pretty hot tbh

Thanks on feed.

Hahahah I actually did NOT know that, but I can just pretend I do and say that's exactly what i was talking about

[D'Leh]

im a fan of your shit, maybe if you can give me some advice to use well multies and shit like tha if you wanna check my last drop, The Mask

[gutawafang]

Music, I need it, controversial like three hits to Lady Gaga's penis,


DOPE.

[Relapse.LP]

Insane internal rhyming.

I think the multies could be slightly more complex though. Two syllable multies are good, but try three or even four and it'll be a banger.

Great flow and some clever wordplay too.

Just a question:

Why are most posts in the creative writing section rap verses about how they are so sick in rapping or how you suck in rapping or something else like that.

Not all, but lots of them. Nothing wrong with that... but more originality occasionally would be nice.

[DƎRDYPK]

ahahahaha that was dope bruh
the part about Lady Gaga's penis was sexy
keep up the work

[Slim Zaddy]

nice shit homie ,, you killed it ,, ..

[Relapse.LP]

Insane internal rhyming.

I think the multies could be slightly more complex though. Two syllable multies are good, but try three or even four and it'll be a banger.

Great flow and some clever wordplay too.

Just a question:

Why are most posts in the creative writing section rap verses about how they are so sick in rapping or how you suck in rapping or something else like that.

Not all, but lots of them. Nothing wrong with that... but more originality occasionally would be nice.

people say "anyone can do that" but it's because they suck at it, i'm 15 and in school, what should I rap about? so I make the most clever shit I can

I never say anyone can do that if you meant that. There's tons of stuff you could rap about? Politics, social issues, whatever. You don't have to rap about I murder you lyrically, although it can be very dope at times.

[Yah-hah]

Yo Solace I really dig your flow man i don't know it just feels real raw I dig it man keep it up

[Solace]

Thank you all on the great replies

Insane internal rhyming.

I think the multies could be slightly more complex though. Two syllable multies are good, but try three or even four and it'll be a banger.

Great flow and some clever wordplay too.

Just a question:

Why are most posts in the creative writing section rap verses about how they are so sick in rapping or how you suck in rapping or something else like that.

Not all, but lots of them. Nothing wrong with that... but more originality occasionally would be nice.

people say "anyone can do that" but it's because they suck at it, i'm 15 and in school, what should I rap about? so I make the most clever shit I can

I never say anyone can do that if you meant that. There's tons of stuff you could rap about? Politics, social issues, whatever. You don't have to rap about I murder you lyrically, although it can be very dope at times.

1. Lol why the fuck would I rap about politics, you expect a 14 year old to rap about stimulus plans or whatever?
2. Social issues? Ive been whining too music before.

I don't want to do love raps because I just really don't give a fuck to write one, emo verses ive done 10000 times and stuff like dissing the fucked up society has been done. I just love trying to make clever shit with multies and thats all there is to it to me.

[Relapse.LP]

You don't have to rap about politics, but there's damn more than just lyrically murdering someone in terms of multies and rhyme schemes. Lyrical ability is not only judged on how well you rhyme.

But I'm not saying you should rap about anything! Just stating my opinion on the general forum.

Good lyrics though.