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back at you, bitches!

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 9th, '09, 10:07

it's the new kid on the block ready to nuke with words to rock when i'm spitting it harsh
this is truly sick as fuck maybe cause i puke this verse to shock you like i'm electrical charged

murdering hoes than investigate the crimes like C.S.I episodes , you know you and i being foes
is like you signing youre suicide notes, brain-dead villain killin red-head women, spike blade spinin'

willin' to have a change of feelin' but when i have my rage revealin' i paint brains all over the ceiling
an age of sinning so i torture just to hear-screams spear-schemes leavin you with a pierced-spleen

I'm a crack-addict, ecstasy got my back-static counting dead bodies like mathmatics, plasmatic
it's just sulfuric acid don't panic, drill a hole in your stomach, get a blindfold and throwed in traffic.
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throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: back at you, bitches!

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 9th, '09, 14:15

lol ,, man i loved it , you got some sick puchlines over there ,, flowed well even though you have long lines ,,,,,,,,, keep it up dude :worship:
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Re: back at you, bitches!

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 9th, '09, 14:34

than's zaddy :flower:
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Re: back at you, bitches!

Postby gutawafang » Sep 9th, '09, 15:50

Haha. Funny structure. Kinda long lines but I can still flow to it man. It's pretty random but it's dope man. Cool punchlines here and there. :8)
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Re: back at you, bitches!

Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 17:49

lol i love it!!!! :y:
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Re: back at you, bitches!

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 9th, '09, 18:34

gutawafang wrote:Haha. Funny structure. Kinda long lines but I can still flow to it man. It's pretty random but it's dope man. Cool punchlines here and there. :8)

thank's bro :worship: yeah it is kinda random :D
zurditoshady wrote:lol i love it!!!! :y:

thx zurdito :flower:
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Re: back at you, bitches!

Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 18:35

any feed on Sexy Chick??
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