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Re: Struggle For A 14

Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 17:51

love it ....any feed? Sexy Chick
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Struggle For A 14

Postby mcZu » Sep 9th, '09, 22:26

Not bad, below your standards though. Still a solid drop.

Btw, was that line a diss? :o (because it can be interperted in 2 ways, lol).
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Re: Struggle For A 14

Postby classthe_king » Sep 9th, '09, 23:24

Agree with what you said about it being below par for you. Still had some good lines in their though like the christian one.

And yeah, nobody is giving feed for some reason :zipped:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Struggle For A 14

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 10th, '09, 10:43

its not bad imo, could have been better, atleast the verse had flow homes :y:
you could do better tho :y:
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Re: Struggle For A 14

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 10th, '09, 11:30

as said above bro ,, but still i liked it ,, but i hve seen better from ya.. :y:
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