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Re: i just want to change it all

Postby classthe_king » Sep 10th, '09, 01:20

That was dope as fuck :worship: and all true
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: i just want to change it all

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 10th, '09, 02:33

Damn, deep, angry shit man, I really liked the vibe of this piece. Very well done, I enjoyed it. :flower:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: i just want to change it all

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 10th, '09, 04:29

the 2nd verse was especially fire nice
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Re: i just want to change it all

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 10th, '09, 11:37

sick man , i loved it , loved the way you expressed yourself here , and the emotions insdie each verse ,,,,,,,,, dope track ,, keeeeep them comming homie :y:
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Re: i just want to change it all

Postby D'Leh » Sep 10th, '09, 20:42

deep shit man, secodn verse's fire, good shit Scotty!!! :y:
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Re: i just want to change it all

Postby D'Leh » Sep 10th, '09, 21:05

any feed? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=67430
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