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Postby J Roc » Sep 10th, '09, 05:14

Check the Blueprints, whut i'm Blowing-is-hard &'ll put a "Hole-In-Ya-Arm" Like Meth Abusement
And Ur Slut?-Please! She "Suck-Seeds" Like the best of Students..(Succeeds)
Giving Neck to Dudes Dick, Cock-Twos if "Brah-Loose" it was Breast Removement
I'mma Never lose Bitch, The Best to Do It.. Ur Bars "Don't Work" Like ur Lines is on Strike
Fuck-Battles...You Couldn't "Touch-Handles" If You Was Riding A Bike
If Rain's Dropping-Bad You Couldn't "Shock-ya-Fans" If They was Flying a Kite
I'm Pitying Him..Ur Dough?-Yes, You Got "No-Ends".. Ur Like infinity, Bitch
If Ur Giving Me Shit.. And Fireing-Off Keep ur "Eyes-On-the-Ball" But Ur Shots a Hit & a Miss
I'mma Retire These Bars...Cuz i'm "Tired" Like Car's...Forreal ZZZZZZZzzzzz
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Re: 1AM

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 01:02

Nice drop. Lol@ the succeed line, I've a similar line. :smoking:
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Re: 1AM

Postby J Roc » Sep 11th, '09, 04:10

Thanks zoo :y:
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Re: 1AM

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 11th, '09, 05:03

Kinda of a unique flow and I like it better. Nice wordplay all that was dope man for real. I got a different flow too and it's nice to see someone with something different. Really dug it though keep it up
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
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Re: 1AM

Postby gutawafang » Sep 11th, '09, 11:50

Fucking dope wordplay and punchlines. PERIOD. :worship:
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Re: 1AM

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 11th, '09, 14:22

THAT WAS CRAZY SON! :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: 1AM

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 28th, '09, 16:10

that was... :confusion: that a right way to explain it... :confusion: yeah.
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: 1AM

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '09, 23:21

Fuckin hell man how do you make that shit up...i hate you for it haha but keep that tight punch shit up :worship:
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