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Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 10th, '09, 13:08

serpent secretly slithering smooth and sneeking slick
like a chedder-seeking chick that'll get down and wet
like a sinking ship, speeking quick like a chinese bitch
spitting sick, when i bomb your set get jumped and wrecked,shit
youre tape got rejected, what you expected?, you dead kid
You guessed it, the one you don't wanna mess with,
better get a first aid kit cause when i burst hatred
call youre plastic surgeon before you get youre face hit
like michael jackson killed by a raped kid who just grave digged
his body out and sprayed sperm all over his fake wig
i'm manic depresed so don't panic princess, i can be softer
than your big breasts, but when i snap i spin heads
till they fall off like skin shreads, identical twins dead.
"misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: weirdo.

Postby gutawafang » Sep 10th, '09, 14:26

Dope flow. Normal rhymes and multis.

Nice: i'm manic depresed so don't panic princess, i can be softer :worship:
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Re: weirdo.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 10th, '09, 19:18

gutawafang wrote:Dope flow. Normal rhymes and multis.

Nice: i'm manic depresed so don't panic princess, i can be softer :worship:

thank's fish :worship:
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Re: weirdo.

Postby D'Leh » Sep 10th, '09, 20:39

great man, flow and shit, good work!! :y:
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Re: weirdo.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 10th, '09, 21:52

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:impressive :y:

thabk's scott :flower:

zurditoshady wrote:great man, flow and shit, good work!! :y:

apreciate it man :y:
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Re: weirdo.

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 10th, '09, 21:57

i'm manic depresed so don't panic princess, i can be softer
than your big breasts, but when i snap i spin heads
till they fall off like skin shreads, identical twins dead.

that whole thing was dope..
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Re: weirdo.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 10th, '09, 22:13

Fa-Q wrote:i'm manic depresed so don't panic princess, i can be softer
than your big breasts, but when i snap i spin heads
till they fall off like skin shreads, identical twins dead.

that whole thing was dope..

thank's fa-q :happy:
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Re: weirdo.

Postby classthe_king » Sep 10th, '09, 22:24

Rhymes were great, flow was great, liked the first line with all the s's. lol.
This line sounded dope when i rapped it:
better get a first aid kit cause when i burst hatred
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: weirdo.

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 11th, '09, 09:03

classthe_king wrote:Rhymes were great, flow was great, liked the first line with all the s's. lol.
This line sounded dope when i rapped it:
better get a first aid kit cause when i burst hatred

class :worship:
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