Horizon Tale

[mcZu]

Horizon Tale:
-Beat used-

[Talk]
I had a dream... the horizon showed me my path
I had a dream... it was a crystal clear path
However, the wind threw me golden wings, and
..me, stubborn as I am, decided to fly instead of taking that path

[Verse]
I’m trying to stay on track, though tired as hell
My fire never expires, because I live in a hell
I might as well fill ya’ll in, so I let the pencil tell
Trying to run away feeling like a rebel on a treadmill
I’ve an angel in my life, still, the devils touch is what I feel
A rush, feeling pumped up, aint talking high hills
I give ya’ll a look in my life like an episode of the Hills
It’s like walking on a vertical hill, très cold
Aint talking French coats though life’s hard and bold
Trying to ride though I sold my chassis
Half of the shit here doesn’t belong like the head of Cassie
Don’t need ya’ll I’ll dwell further as me
It’s like someone is testing me
And, sir… please stop asking me endlessly
To cross that road right in front me, I won’t front, me
And I is all I can trust right now, sounds about right right now
Until that road turns into an endless roundabout
My sounds about voicing my statements
According to my opinion I’m truly hip hop rated
Maybe that’s why my lyrics are that opinionated
If you think I’m nice that opinion will just get inflated
Bottom line, under the son this song is my opinion’s pavement
And before each day ends my mind state seems maintained
However, my growth grows, so, it's never Zu done
Don't want shit to turn abominable, or in some way gruesome
Either way it's a fact that I grew some...

[D'Leh]

awesome man, nice flow and rhymes, you really got it, congratz man!!! any feed? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=67430

[mcZu]

Thanks Zurdo.

[mcZu]

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[Relapse.LP]

Some of the rhymes schemes could be improved, but decent verse overall.

[classthe_king]

at what time do you start rapping, i can't figure it out.

[Relapse.LP]

at what time do you start rapping, i can't figure it out.

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[Yah-hah]

Yo man nice drop homie I dug it Verse felt a bit choppy but picked up for sure. Keep rollin them things out man

[mcZu]

Thanks everybody, yeah, this piece is all about the delivery and the feel; hence, lyrically it lacks a bit.

at what time do you start rapping, i can't figure it out.

If you mean in correspondence with the beat, when the talking is over.

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked it ,, keep them comming