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Re: undead

Postby Requiem » Sep 10th, '09, 23:53

the middle was stronger than the beginning an end.
best line

"fill you with dread, a ghost .. it's not in your head"

fair, but not bad :b:
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Re: undead

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 01:09

Flowed dope. I enjoyed it, solid drop IMO. :b:
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Re: undead

Postby Marshall's Queen » Sep 14th, '09, 00:26

" i love it when people bring out the best of me
they think they're testing me, but when they see the rest of me
they'll be dreading me; i'll lyrically bamboozle them mentally
i'll go under them, not sexually, but fucking aggressively
and uppercut them til they so high they can see their own destiny
which is their death you see, say fuck me on the internet
but when you see me face to face it's different isn't it ..
you're like HIV to me, you're annoying, can't get rid of it
and every day i get started on by a different prick
but they never finish it, they talk shit but don't deliver it
i squash it, wash and rinse the beef, diminish it "



Wooow iLike that AlOTT ! :worship:
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