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Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 01:02

Nine squared encrypted lines mystified with crystal rhymes
Cryptic signs with magnificent lights
Not talkin’ ‘bout the German word for no
However, ya’ll know better so just stay low
Clever, whatever, doesn’t even matter if you rather be dope
Their flows couldn’t succeed even if the mic got nine deep throats
We give birth after nine words, to hemoglobin from the spine
Nine bone marrow arrows issues issuing mine
Collateral abominable myocardial above nine tables
Probable to cut the un-operable nine bodies of mantras unstoppable
Kicking it high like nine notes at the opera do
I give you all of me like nine people on opera do
Serve ya’ll like nine dishes delivered in a restaurant on a table too
I rest, and vent, nine times over while staying sober it seems
Hungry, though the past aint ‘bout how I ate teens
Go out like nine shots fired from nine nine’s and nine glocks
Sounds like thee end around nine PM looking at the clock
That’s how three nine’s in one verse be on lock
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 11th, '09, 04:50

Hahah I dug it man for real. Did you have like some anatomy book when you was writing or something :P
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 11th, '09, 04:55

Lol Jus and those first couple lines were crazy dope...I liked it
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 14:23

Yah-hah wrote:Hahah I dug it man for real. Did you have like some anatomy book when you was writing or something :P


Lol, naah, no need for a book.. it's all in my head. And thanks man, appreciate it. :b:

Fa-Q wrote:Lol Jus and those first couple lines were crazy dope...I liked it


Thanks bro, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby gutawafang » Sep 11th, '09, 15:52

Haha. Just noticed the title was a date. :p Nice man. Nice. This time it's not about your nameplay. It's your vocab. Sick dude. :flower:
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 17:42

gutawafang wrote:Haha. Just noticed the title was a date. :p Nice man. Nice. This time it's not about your nameplay. It's your vocab. Sick dude. :flower:


Thanks Guta, yeah, I wrote this on 9/9/09 :b:
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby Xray » Sep 11th, '09, 21:50

I don't know if its my high, but that's the sickest song someone has posted in this section. The wordplay, vocab, multis etc. came out destroying it. For real man caraaaaaaaazy job.
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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 12th, '09, 19:23

mcZu wrote:Nine squared encrypted lines mystified with crystal rhymes
Cryptic signs with magnificent lights
Not talkin’ ‘bout the German word for no
However, ya’ll know better so just stay low
Clever, whatever, doesn’t even matter if you rather be dope
Their flows couldn’t succeed even if the mic got nine deep throats
We give birth after nine words, to hemoglobin from the spine
Nine bone marrow arrows issues issuing mine
Collateral abominable myocardial above nine tables
Probable to cut the un-operable nine bodies of mantras unstoppable
Kicking it high like nine notes at the opera do
I give you all of me like nine people on opera do
Serve ya’ll like nine dishes delivered in a restaurant on a table too
I rest, and vent, nine times over while staying sober it seems
Hungry, though the past aint ‘bout how I ate teens
Go out like nine shots fired from nine nine’s and nine glocks
Sounds like thee end around nine PM looking at the clock
That’s how three nine’s in one verse be on lock



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Re: Nine/Nine/O-Nine

Postby mcZu » Sep 13th, '09, 20:18

Thanks Xray and Arabian Shady, appreciate it. :b: :b:
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