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At The Speed Of Dark

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Re: At The Speed Of Dark

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 13th, '09, 02:28

Why don't you bite Ems sty...lol just kidding lol I thought the flow was insane the first like 10 bars it was so easy to do and I read it a second time and I did the stop and go flow like you said and it was easier...good work man
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Re: At The Speed Of Dark

Postby Spyder » Sep 13th, '09, 21:54

is this an anon diss?
i mean it says forsakes... in the title of his last song
says can i bus...canibus is his favorite rapper
and then says MC, which is pretty broad, but could be subliminal :shifty:
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Re: At The Speed Of Dark

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 13th, '09, 22:15

Make more sense and stay on topic... I don't know what the fuck this has to do with the speed of dark. smh
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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