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Anger

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 12th, '09, 23:03

Bestill your fright and then I really want you to feel my might
Steal your life, blast you with the fuckin steel like knight
I grab a parachute and then a pair of boots
land on top of your roof, I'm scaring you with the proof
It's a catastrophe, motherfucker battle me
and if you don't want to do that, then I will just rattle teeth
not scared of you, I will look at you and stare at you
then bash you in your retard face, burn a hair or two
I'm prepared to lose, If I win it's then that's a good look
ready to run through two crooks, leavin' crews shook
troops in salute, sound proof booth for the youth
slueths couldn't move, the truth is soon to be used
I'm a systematic, rap addict, sorta savage
I damage anybody above the average, I've had it
I rap it rapid, cadavers splatter on platters, the laughter
scatters faster then shatner, bastards I'm here like the matter
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Anger

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 13th, '09, 02:37

MC Anonymous wrote:Bestill your fright and then I really want you to feel my might
Steal your life, blast you with the fuckin steel like knight
I grab a parachute and then a pair of boots
land on top of your roof, I'm scaring you with the proof
It's a catastrophe, motherfucker battle me
and if you don't want to do that, then I will just rattle teeth
not scared of you, I will look at you and stare at you
then bash you in your retard face, burn a hair or two
I'm prepared to lose, If I win it's then that's a good look
ready to run through two crooks, leavin' crews shook
troops in salute, sound proof booth for the youth
slueths couldn't move, the truth is soon to be used
I'm a systematic, rap addict, sorta savage
I damage anybody above the average, I've had it
I rap it rapid, cadavers splatter on platters, the laughter
scatters faster then shatner, bastards I'm here like the matter


Mobb Deep bite?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Anger

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 13th, '09, 02:52

da.relapse.lp wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Bestill your fright and then I really want you to feel my might
Steal your life, blast you with the fuckin steel like knight
I grab a parachute and then a pair of boots
land on top of your roof, I'm scaring you with the proof
It's a catastrophe, motherfucker battle me
and if you don't want to do that, then I will just rattle teeth
not scared of you, I will look at you and stare at you
then bash you in your retard face, burn a hair or two
I'm prepared to lose, If I win it's then that's a good look
ready to run through two crooks, leavin' crews shook
troops in salute, sound proof booth for the youth
slueths couldn't move, the truth is soon to be used
I'm a systematic, rap addict, sorta savage
I damage anybody above the average, I've had it
I rap it rapid, cadavers splatter on platters, the laughter
scatters faster then shatner, bastards I'm here like the matter


Mobb Deep bite?

Didn't know using 2 words is a bite? Wtf you on about. I don't even listen to Mobb Deep.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Anger

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 13th, '09, 03:17

Calm down. I just thought that, because they have an entire song dedicated to talk about "shook ones" and "shook crews."

I should've figured a person like you wouldn't touch a Mobb Deep album. My mistake...
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Anger

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 03:34

da.relapse.lp wrote:Calm down. I just thought that, because they have an entire song dedicated to talk about "shook ones" and "shook crews."

I should've figured a person like you wouldn't touch a Mobb Deep album. My mistake...


Haha dude shut the fuck up. He said he leaves crews shook. That means that he bit mobb deep because they had a song about shook crews. What the fuck are you on.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Anger

Postby gutawafang » Sep 14th, '09, 03:36

MC Anonymous wrote:Bestill your fright and then I really want you to feel my might
Steal your life, blast you with the fuckin steel like knight
I grab a parachute and then a pair of boots
land on top of your roof, I'm scaring you with the proof
It's a catastrophe, motherfucker battle me
and if you don't want to do that, then I will just rattle teeth
not scared of you, I will look at you and stare at you
then bash you in your retard face, burn a hair or two
I'm prepared to lose, If I win it's then that's a good look
ready to run through two crooks, leavin' crews shook
troops in salute, sound proof booth for the youth
slueths couldn't move, the truth is soon to be used
I'm a systematic, rap addict, sorta savage
I damage anybody above the average, I've had it
I rap it rapid, cadavers splatter on platters, the laughter
scatters faster then shatner, bastards I'm here like the matter


Hope you text battle again man. :worship:

If not, audio battle. :worship:

Fucking dope. :worship:

Honestly. :worship:

Seriously. :worship:
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Re: Anger

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:36

classthe_king wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:Calm down. I just thought that, because they have an entire song dedicated to talk about "shook ones" and "shook crews."

I should've figured a person like you wouldn't touch a Mobb Deep album. My mistake...


Haha dude shut the fuck up. He said he leaves crews shook. That means that he bit mobb deep because they had a song about shook crews. What the fuck are you on.


I just introduced you to Mobb Deep, eh, classthe_king?

First time you heard their name? Listen to their fucking song before posting, cunt.

And look at Coleon's claims and tell me they're less whack than mine. He says I bite Nas every word.

Fuck you class. Battle me, bitch.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Anger

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:41

da.relapse.lp wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:Calm down. I just thought that, because they have an entire song dedicated to talk about "shook ones" and "shook crews."

I should've figured a person like you wouldn't touch a Mobb Deep album. My mistake...


Haha dude shut the fuck up. He said he leaves crews shook. That means that he bit mobb deep because they had a song about shook crews. What the fuck are you on.


I just introduced you to Mobb Deep, eh, classthe_king?

First time you heard their name? Listen to their fucking song before posting, cunt.

And look at Coleon's claims and tell me they're less whack than mine. He says I bite Nas every word.

Fuck you class. Battle me, bitch.


Lmao, i have better things to do then battle someone idiot on the internet who thinks hes hard because hes behind a computer. And lol @ you saying you introduced me to mobb deep. Ive been bumping juvenile hell, the infamous ect since the seventh grade.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Anger

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:43

Lol, I'm acting "hard" behind a computer to you, dude. You just go on every comment I say and hate on it. It gets annoying...

I know you're afraid to lose. Takes you several days to write a verse, hm?

And for you bumping The Infamous since 7th grade, how old are you now?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Anger

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:46

Well everything you say is annoying.
It doesn't take me several days to write a verse, i have a life and rarely have time to right a verse.

Actually i rep the sophmores wit Coleon. And im not replying to you in this anymore because i dont want to spam anon's thread.
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Re: Anger

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:47

First, spell "write" right.

You have a life? I seriously doubt that shit.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Anger

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 15th, '09, 16:21

awesome!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Anger

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 16th, '09, 13:06

flow was tite homes, nice structure and multies, good potrait of emotion :y:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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